Robust Verbs- Theadmiral

In Vancouver, a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits has ARISEN. Although crime rates are at an all time high because of these addicts, the “free heroin for addicts” program has aided in helping people with this addiction. For an addict, getting through the day can be hard because their addiction is so strong, and often makes it difficult to interact in their places of work, with friends, and have relationships. Because their addiction cannot be broken, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. Breaking and entering, and theft are only some of the crimes these users will commit for their fix. No limits exist as to where they will go to retrieve this drug so their addiction can be fed. Even though the program has the right idea, and helping out the crime rates, we are not helping those addicted to heroin. By providing drugs to users, they will not have to commit the minor crimes for money or drugs. The “free heroin for addicts” program will also provide needles and a safe using environment, so the hospitals do not have to get involved. The program will help clean up the city of Vancouver, but not the lives of users.

Robust Verbs – theintern

Vancouver has a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop these addicts. Large crime starts with the problem of many addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the drugs they are using. Heroin users are so addicted to the drug that they’ll do anything to get their hands on the drug. The crimes mostly committed are within stealing from others either of breaking in or entering.  Addicts have no limit, they must feed their addiction in anyway possible. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The programs main goal is to keep the crimes rates down. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

Enough about you—todayistheday19

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much without it. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it is not physically present. In today’s society there must be faith in the government and the banking system. We have to trust that our money is being handled in the proper manner and not being stolen. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. An individual doesn’t actually see their money being transferred. When they get paid, they, typically, aren’t handed cash. They either receive a pay check or the money is directly transferred into their bank account. One just has to trust that they paid.

Robust Verbs- Yoshi

There is a huge problem in Vancouver, concerning heroin addicts. A program was designed, that gave the addicts free heroin.  Even with the “free heroin for addicts” project crime rates continue to rise. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. The program does not help addicts avoid heroin. The program does however, help the streets of Vancouver become a better place with less crime. Heroin users also fill the hospital because of their infections from dirty needles. The program gives addicts free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The ‘free heroin for addicts” program will in turn fix the city, but not the addiction that these people face.

Robust Verbs – rainbow987

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

Revised with Robust Verbs:

In Vancouver, heroin addicts often commit crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program attempts to do everything it can to stop the addicts. Unfortunately, the large crime rate due to the addicts proves problematic. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Addicts struggle with daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships. Heroin users will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. Users may commit crimes such as breaking and entering or stealing. The program won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The program only helps to save the city from rising crime rates. Addicts will be off the streets if given the drug, resulting in a lower number of street crimes. In addition, less heroin users require hospitalization. Hospitals should not have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles.The program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The idea of the program helps to fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

Robust Verbs—todayistheday19

Vancouver, alarmed by high crime rates, decided to institute a program that provides addicts with free heroin. Heroin addicts indulge in criminal activity to feed their addiction. Heroin addicts clog the hospitals when they plunge dirty needles into their veins. Free heroin keeps addicts from committing crimes to pay for their addiction. The program eliminates hospital traffic by providing clean needles.

E11: Robust Subjects and Verbs- Killroy513

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support the habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything to stop the addicts. The problem is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Robust Verbs–Splash305

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

A huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem with the large crime rate is due to the rising rate of addicts. This group is trying to make it obvious how addicts have a problem getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships with people are hard to maintain for those under the influence of drugs. Heroin users who are very addicted, will do whatever it takes get their hands on drugs. The types of crimes committed for example are breaking an entering and stealing. When it comes to addicts, limits to how far they will go to retrieve the drug to feed their addiction does not exist. This program’s problem is not helping by weening these addicts off of using heroin. By removing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital because of their use of drugs. It’s pointless for hospitals to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or use unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills, and having a hard time coping without the drug. This program is giving people free heroin in the cleanest way possible in hopes to keep them off the street. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face everyday.

Robust Verbs – collegegirl

Heroin addicts cause a huge problem in Vancouver by committing crimes to support their habits. To stop the addicts, Vancouver created a program “free heroin for addicts” which does everything it can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because they are using. Addicted heroin users will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. Feeding their addictions has no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug. This program won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The program only tries to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. Providing the drug to these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Enough about you – theintern

Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then you would have to hide all of your money under your mattress or around your house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; you either have some or you don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. You don’t actually see your money being transferred. When you get paid, you aren’t handed cash, you don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and you just have to trust that you got more money.

Money has such a big role in our society that not much gets done without it. Money is  valuable and seen in many different ways. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of our money. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. We don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, the payment is not visible or physically but the money’s all directly transferred to our bank account, and we just have to trust that we got more money.