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Grammar Exercise-paTricKStar123

Children raised by neglective caretakers have an increased risk of growing up with hostility toward other and may do harm to themselves. The cause of this is children don’t learn how to cope with life disappointments. This is the affect … Continue reading

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Casual Argument Rewrite- paTricKStar123

College is a place where we go to further enhance our education. This is where students come to learn more about themselves and choose their career paths for the future. This set environment could be very intimidating. For most students … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric Rewrite-paTricKStar123

  0:00-0:01 The ad opens up with a look of the with a nature background from the mountains overlooking mile and miles of grass and plantlife. 0:01-0:04 The rabbit seems to be running in a excited pace. it could either … Continue reading

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“Enough About You- pATricKStar123”

Money seems to have a big role in our society; without having a substantial amount it remains difficult to survive and obtain virtually anything. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society, … Continue reading

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Rebuttal argument- PATricKStar123

Mental health treatment extends out of the boundaries of the school system Mental health illness is a very tricky subject especially when it comes to determining who has it and who does not. Most people who struggle with a mental … Continue reading

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Casual Argument- paTricKStar123

Are Colleges doing enough to help with Students mental health issues College is a place where we go to further enhance our education. This is where students come to learn more about themselves and choose their career paths for the … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric-pATricKStar123

  0:00-0:01 The ad opens up with a scene of a beautiful nature scene. You are looking over some type of hill/ mountain. 0:01-0:03 next we see a rabbit running seems excited/desperate. the scene opens up to see a garden … Continue reading

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