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Rebuttal argument- PATricKStar123

Mental health treatment extends out of the boundaries of the school system   Mental health illness is a very tricky subject especially when it comes to determining who has it and who does not. Most people who struggle with a … Continue reading

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Casual Argument- paTricKStar123

Are Colleges doing enough to help with Students mental health issues College is a place where we go to further enhance our education. This is where students come to learn more about themselves and choose their career paths for the … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric-pATricKStar123

  The ad opens up with a scene of a beautiful nature scene. You are looking over some type of hill/ mountain. next we see a rabbit running seems excited/desperate. the scene opens up to see a garden with a … Continue reading

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Needs a Title While there are many law protecting the right of humans there aren’t as many laws protecting animals. Our country has made great effort in the past to protect animals once it has become severe. what i mean … Continue reading

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PTSD Claims- pATricKStar123

SECTION 5 1. “Trauma is a contagious disease; it affects everyone that has close contact with a traumatized person” Living with someone with PTSD can be very stressful. Especially if you have to see someone you care about and are close … Continue reading

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Stone money—paTRicKStar

As I listened to the story of the people of yap, I tried to compare their curriency with ours.  The people the yap use form of currency that involves limestones.  These limestones are very heavy and are and abnormally large … Continue reading

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White paper 2—pATricKStar

Hypothesis College students are at a high risk for mental health issues in the U.S. Source 1 The article explains how there has been an increase in the level of mental illness in college students everywhere. It also specifies … Continue reading

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