Annotated Bibliography- Juniorgirlblog

1.”Police Violence Reports.” Mapping Police Violence. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background:  the statics on the year of 2015 and how many unarmed African American men was killed.  This article shows  each African American including women who was killed by the cops.

How I use it : I used this article to show the African American males were being target but wasn’t the only ones being target.

2.”Police shooting 2016 data”- Washington Post:

Background: T 719 people have been shot and killed this year by the police. It also shows that 991 people were killed by the police in 2015.

How I use it : I used it to show , so far the most killings occurred in 2015 however 2016 is not over yet and the number of killings for this year so far is a lot.

3.Williams, Janice. “Police Shooting Statistics 2016: Are More Black People Killed By Officers Than Other Races?” International Business Times. N.p., 26 Sept. 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: not only was 991 people was killed in 2015, but out of that total 258 were black. This year, out of the 719 people who was killed, 178 were black .

How I use it:  This article that since last year it has increased. Also more men are being killed by the police then women.

4. McKay, Tom. “One Map Shows How Many People Police Have Killed in Each State So Far This Year.” Mic. N.p., 25 Oct. 2015. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: the map of the United States where the most police shooting has occurred in 2016. Out of  the 50 states, in 47 of them, at least one or more people have been killed by police shootings.

How I use it  :   to show the rate of the killing in each state .

5.Calacal, Celisa. “This Is How Many People Police Have Killed so Far in 2016.” ThinkProgress. N.p., 04 Nov. 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: how many people have been killed this year even though the year not over yet. This article reports that 855 people have died at the hands of police officers.

How I use it: This proves that Native American and African Americans are being killed at the highest rate in the United States.

6. Bult, Laura. “Cop in Sandra Bland Case Accuses Prosecutors of Coverup.” NY Daily News. N.p., 29 July 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background:The officer in this case says he was threaten to keep quite about what really happen in the case.

How I use it : To discover that the cop who they gather evidence for is found not guilty.

7.”Sandra Bland’s Death: What We Know.” CNN. Cable News Network, n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background:  This article is about a innocent lady was stopped by white officer because of her “signal light” and was later killed at the prison.

How I use it :I used it to show that they killed a African American women with a video of the officer mistreating her . With the video against the officer, he doesn’t serve jail time.

Definition Argument- brobeanfarms

As technology advanced, so did the average life span of the human race. Over time we have came across many new diseases, some with a higher severity. Out of every single disease, there is one that still stands out and strikes curiosity, Alzheimer’s Disease. Alzheimer’s disease is an irreversible, progressive brain disorder that slowly destroys memory and thinking skills, and eventually the ability to carry out the simplest tasks. Discovered in 1906, Dr. Alzheimer noticed changes in brain tissue along with behavioral changes, which inevitably led to the discovery of Alzheimer’s Disease. Alzheimer’s Disease accounts for 60% to 70% of cases of dementia, which also affects the brain tissue and the way the brain functions.

The brain itself is a complex organ. Signals that form memories and thoughts move through an individual nerve cell as a tiny electrical charge. Nerve cells connect to one another at synapses. When a charge reaches a synapse, it may trigger release of tiny bursts of chemicals called neurotransmitters. The neurotransmitters travel across the synapse, carrying signals to other cells. Scientists have identified dozens of neurotransmitters. In other words, this is how the brain communicates with the body and allows the body to carry out the necessary functions. In Alzheimer’s Disease, plaques are found between the dying cells in the brain from the build-up of a protein called beta-amyloid. The tangles created from these plaques are within the brain neurons from a disintegration of another protein, called tau(Medicine Plus 3). These built up protein clumps found around the neurons in the brain are the main cause of Alzheimer’s Disease. These clumps disrupt the way electrical charges travel within cells and the activity of neurotransmitters, making it difficult for the brain to carry out necessary actions.

 

Works Cited

“Alzheimer’s Disease & Dementia | Alzheimer’s Association.” Alzheimer’s Disease & Dementia | Alzheimer’s Association. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

“Alzheimer’s Disease: MedlinePlus.” MedlinePlus. U.S. National Library of Medicine, n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Bibliography—Phillyfan321

  1. New Jersey Sales Tax Guide.” (n.d.): Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Background: This website is a complete guide of items that are either taxable or tax exempt in the State of New Jersey.

How I Used it: Since my claim is that the New Jersey sales tax is not regressive, I used it as a resource to make my claim. I was able to list non-essential items that were tax exempt.

2. Samantha Marcus. “N.J. Gas Tax Hike Deal: Christie Demanded a Sales Tax Cut, but Will You Notice It?” NJ.com. N.p., 29 Oct. 2016. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Background: This article talks about how the New Jersey sales tax is going to be lowered from 7% to 6.875% on January 1, 2017.

How I used it: I do not believe this change is helping low income people because many items are tax exempt. It is a small cut in a luxury tax.

3. “2016 State Sales Tax Rates.” 2016 State Sales Tax Rates. N.p., n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Background: This website shows all the sales tax rates in all 50 States.

How I used it: I compared the sales tax rates by State in my Causal Argument and it had the exact tax percentages for each State.

4. “Sales Tax By State: Are Grocery Items Taxable?” TaxJar Sales Tax Blog. N.p., 30 Aug. 2016. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Background: This source is a map of all 50 States and shows which States tax grocery items and unprepared food.

How I used it: I discussed how a sales tax takes on groceries takes up more income of the working poor. I used this map to give examples of States that do tax groceries.

5. “Progressive Tax And Regressive Tax.” Encyclopedia of Education Economics & Finance(n.d.): n. pag. Sept. 2016. Web. 6 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article talked about how a sales tax takes up a higher percentage of a person with a lower income than someone with a higher income.

How I used it: I wrote about how States that tax groceries are taxing a higher percentage of someone’s income if they already are on a low income.

6. “NJ Division of Taxation-S&U Tax: Home ImprovementsNJ Division of Taxation – S & U Tax: Home Improvements. N.p., 20 Oct. 2014. Web. 13 Nov. 2016. b. 13 Nov. 2016.

Background: This is an informative article posted by the NJ Division of Taxation. It meant to give business owner guidance on how much sales tax they should collect for the services they offer.

How I used it: I listed repair services as something that is taxed. I also wrote about how this service tax can be avoided if insurance pays for the damages and the person who purchases the insurance does not have to pay the sales tax out of pocket.

7. “Regressive Tax.” Investopedia. N.p., 15 May 2015. Web. 23 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article just describes what a regressive tax is and how it taxes a disproportionate part of someone’s income.

How I used it: Since my thesis is that the sales tax is not regressive, I needed to know exactly what regressive means and how to counter argue my hypothesis.

8. Who Pays for New Jersey’s Gas TaxNJ Spotlight? Murali, Raghul.N.p., 10 Nov. 2016. Web. 20 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article discusses how people who make less money will pay a larger percentage of their income toward the gas tax. Also, those who depend on their car to get to work will have an extra expense. Part of the bill that raised the gas tax also lowered the sales tax to 6.875%.

How I used it:I used this article to discuss how I believe the sales tax is not a regressive tax but the gas gas is regressive.

9. Samantha Marcus. “N.J. Gas Tax Hike Deal: Christie Demanded a Sales Tax Cut, but Will You Notice It?” NJ.com. N.p., 29 Oct. 2016. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Background: This article is about how the gas tax increased and that the small sales tax cut will not make a big different. Gasoline is an essential item for people who rely on it for transportation.

How I used it: I wrote about how the sales tax cut is unnecessary. Since the tax is only on luxury items and not essential goods, it should not be lowered. I also discussed how the gas tax is very regressive and the sales tax is not.

10. NEW JERSEY DIVISION OF TAXATION MINIMUM LEGAL PRICES ON CIGARETTES AS OF AUGUST 2, 2016  (n.d.): n. pag. Web. 13 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article is the minimum prices for cigarette brands sold in New Jersey. All forms of tobacco are subject to the sales tax.

How I used it: I wrote about how the sales tax does tax non-essential items and exempts essential items. Cigarettes are obviously non-essential and are taxed. I also discussed how cigarettes are ok to tax highly, but gasoline is much more essential than cigarettes so the excise tax on gasoline should be lower.

11. “Supplemental Nutrition Assistance Program (SNAP).” Eligible Food Items | Food and Nutrition Service. N.p., 21 Mar. 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This is an article from the United States Department of Agriculture. The article lists item that either can be or can not be bought with food stamps.

How I used it: Well in some of my arguments I discussed how New Jersey does not tax groceries. Since a person who relies on SNAP to buy groceries, they have to use their SNAP credits wisely. New Jersey does not tax groceries, so people who rely on SNAP benefits do not have to pay taxes on the items they purchase. Most items that can be bought with SNAP benefits are tax exempt, but some items that can be bought with SNAP benefits are taxable.

Bibliography- belladonna98

1. Ed.D., Brian Harke. “High School to College Transition, Part 1: The Freshman Myth.” The Huffington Post. TheHuffingtonPost.com, 22 June 2010. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Background: This Huffington Post article gives insight on the “Freshman Myth,” or the unrealistic optimism that college freshmen have as they enter their first semester. It details how challenging the academics of college are, and how students are often not prepared to face such challenges. It also offers solutions to prevent academic culture shock early on so students are not caught off guard once they actually get to college.

How I Used It: I used this article to prove that students are often not prepared for college, and that the academic stress can cause dysregulation in students’ lives.

2. Shook, Nancy J., Debora A. Gerrity, Joan Jurich, and Allen E. Segrist. “Courtship Violence Among College Students: A Comparison of Verbally and Physically Abusive Couples.” SpringerLink. N.p., Mar. 2000. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Background: The article gives statistical analysis on the percent of college students who have engaged in verbal and physical violence with romantic partners, and why they did so. It shows that the majority have engaged in verbal violence.

How I Used It: This helped me prove verbal violence, a form of relationship and emotional dysregulation, is common among college students. The statistics were invaluable in proving that dysregulation exists in everyday college life, and is part of the “college experience.”

3. Wechsler, Henry, George W. Dowdall, Andrea Davenport, and Sonia Castillo. “Correlates of College Student Binge Drinking.” American Journal of Public Health, n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Background: The article gives statistical analysis of how many college students engage in binge drinking, showing that almost half do so.

How I Used It: These statistics helped me prove that binge drinking, a form of behavior dysregulation, is common among college students.

4. ELI (Extended Learning Institute at NOVA), Lumen Learning. “College Success.” Candela Learning. N.p., n.d. Web. 06 Nov. 2016.

Bakcground: This online textbook offers insight to college students on how to handle everything from finances to emotional health. It is a sort of how-to guide for college, geared towards freshman who don’t know what they’re doing. It offers life skills and academic skills to help the transition to college go a bit smoother.

How I Used It: I used this book to illustrate just how stressful the transition to college is, specifically academically. People write entire textbooks trying to teach us how to deal with it!

5. Rizvi, Shireen L. “Treatment Failure in Dialectical Behavior Therapy.” Cognitive and Behavioral Practice 18.3 (2011): 403-12. Science Direct. 2011. Web. 13 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article chronicles Shireen Rizvi’s experience with a patient, Barbara, and their collective failure to implement and practice DBT correctly. Rizvi uses this story to argue that DBT does not work for everyone, specifically in extreme cases of BPD, such as Barbara’s.

How I Used It: I used this article to prove that it is not DBT that fails, it is the therapists that do. When therapists fail to see their patients as people, and cannot adapt DBT to each one’s specific needs, they fail to help their patients at all. But DBT itself does not fail.

6. Robbins, Clive J., and Zachary Rosenthal. “Dialectical Behavior Therapy.” Acceptance and Mindfulness in Cognitive Behavior Therapy. John Wiley & Sons, n.d. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Background: In its section on DBT, it outlines the basics of the therapy and for whom it is necessary, citing people with personality disorders. However, it also breaks down common emotional issues known as dysregulation that can be found in all corners of humanity. The ones I will be focusing on are emotional, behavioral, and relationship dysregulation, as these are very common in college students. The article gives examples of how DBT can help these kinds of dysregulation.

How I Used It: This article helped me not only discover the basics of DBT when used in people with personality disorders, but also those who suffer from everyday dysregulation. This gave me a definition to work with, and a jumping off point to start to redefine DBT.

7. User Cabdriver. “DBT: How Is It Working for You?” RSS. N.p., 19 Sept. 2010. Web. 23 Nov. 2016.

Background: In this forum, user cabdriver gives other members a list of the factors that led to him believing that DBT failed him. These include everything from not doing his homework to “the existential emptiness of DBT.” Each point is elaborated on, giving me a great patient point of view.

How I Used It: This was a great argument to rebut. I used this as an example of a patient who is against DBT, and then attempted to disprove said patient’s argument.

8. @DbtPeers. “An Introduction to Dialectical Thinking According to DBT.” DBT Peer Connections. N.p., 18 Oct. 2013. Web. 21 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article gives a nice definition of dialectical thinking. It also teaches DBT patients how to implement it into their daily lives.

How I Used It: This was very useful in my definition argument, helping me define dialectical thinking.

9. Clearviewtreatment. “Five Areas of Dysregulation in People with BPD – Borderline Personality Treatment.” Borderline Personality Treatment. N.p., 12 Oct. 2011. Web. 21 Nov. 2016.

Background: This gives very clear-cut definitions of the five most common types of dysregulation, often found in people with BPD.

How I Used It: This was invaluable for my definition argument, giving me definitions  to apply not only to those with BPD, but to all college students.

10. “Dialectical Behavioral Therapy & Treatment – Clinical Excellence at Sierra Tucson.” Sierra Tucson. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 Nov. 2016.

Background: This is another article that outlines the basics of DBT, but it also includes the benefits. These include decreasing harmful behaviors and learning to make emotion-independent choices. It also gives a list of disorders that DBT can treat. However, the benefits seem to be universal.

How I Used It: This was immensely helpful in my definition of DBT. It also helped me prove that DBT has universal benefits, regardless of mental state.

11. Van Dijk, Sheri. “Don’t Let Your Emotions Run Your Life for Teens.” Google Books. Instant Help Books, n.d. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Background: This wonderful book teaches teens how to apply DBT skills to their lives, step by step. It covers pretty much everything a teenager could need, from recognizing emotions to mindfulness and more. This is the book I used in therapy when I was first introduced to DBT and it helped me immensely, and I thought it could help me in this paper as well.

How I Used Ii: This book shaped my personal definition of DBT. It helped me give an example of how DBT doesn’t have to be as structured and rigid as many people believe it should be.

Bibliography- theshocker69

  1. “Jim Jefferies Has Got Gun Control All Wrong. • /r/progun.” Reddit. Therevenantrising, 20 June 2015. Web. 13 Nov. 2016. 

Background: This is an anonymous reddit user’s post regarding his opinions on Jim Jefferies’ view on gun control. Although social media may not be one of the most reliable sources on the internet, events and statistics listed here are facts

How I Used It: This source worked out great for me because I was already familiar with Jefferies’ performance, this post dissected almost each sentence from his presentation. This made my dissection of his show much easier since it was all organized so neatly on this page.

2. “List of Massacres in Australia.” Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 13 Nov. 2016.

Background: This source is simply a list of Massacres that have occurred in Australia all throughout it’s history.

How I used it: I used this source to find out exactly how many massacres have occurred since Australia’s gun ban. I was able to find the date of the original massacre that caused the gun ban, and the long line of massacres listed thereafter. This helped to prove my point that gun control is counterintuitive to common beliefs.

3. “Locke ‘N Load: John Locke d YOUR Second Amendment Rights.” Intro to Political Theory Blog. Sabalaba, 24 Nov. 2009. Web. 13 Nov. 2016.

Background: This web page was originally designed to convey philosopher John Locke’s view of gun control, the philosophical viewpoint of a firearm, and also to explain the need for firearms to defend against our government.

How I used it: I was able to use this source to have guns perceived in a light they are not usually viewed in. The comparison of a firearm to your natural right to defend yourself and your loved ones is not a straw man, it is an accurate representation. Further, the explanation of firearms as a natural right, given to us by nature, was able to help me further show my point

4. Ghost Guns. Perf. Anonymous Performers. Underworld Inc. National Geographic Network, n.d. Web. 13 Nov. 2016. 

Background: “Ghost Guns” is an episode of National Geographic’s, “Underworld Inc.” In this episode, the producers focused on the illegal gun trade, it’s traffic along our borders, and how it affects our society.

How I used it: This episode was very helpful to my paper. The show gave me so much information on how these guns are moved across our country. I learned more about the techniques that these cartels utilize in order to bring these illegal firearms across the border and I put that information in my paper.

5. “Assault Weapon Truth: The Facts about Assault Weapons.” Assaultweapontruth. Assault Weapon Truth, n.d. Web. 09 Nov. 2016. <http://www.assaultweapontruth.com>.

Background: This website has all the information you could ever need on assault rifles, how they are organized, what constitutes an assault rifle, and even information on gun bans.

How I used it: I used this website to help me explain the legal definition of an assault weapon. I also learned how assault weapons are organized, the difference between an assault rifle and other guns, and I inserted this information into my paper.

Bibliography- Collegekid9

1. “Vancouver Combats Heroin by Giving Its Addicts the Best Smack in the World.” Public Radio International. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article gives general information about what is happening in Vancouver as well as things that are being provided with the clinics.

How It Was Used: This article supplied me with information about the program and what they do. I also got to look at some of the participants of the program.

2.  Lim, Clarissa-Jan. “Prescription Heroin In Vancouver Will Be Handed To Addicts In A Game-Changing Experiment.” Bustle. N.p., 25 Nov. 2014. Web. 30 Nov. 2016. 

Background: This article covers the cause of many addicts overdoses are due to another drug that is being sold as heroin.

How It Was Used: I used this article to show how the clinics are keeping addicts from running into this other drug in the streets.

3. London, Gaëlle Faure /. “Why Doctors Are Giving Heroin to Heroin Addicts.” Time. Time Inc., 28 Sept. 2009. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article displays where this idea manifested. It also discusses the effects of weaning people off of heroin.

How It Was Used: This article supplied me with information about the program and what they do. I also got to look at some of the participants of the program. I was able to see how the program affects them and if it actually works like they intend

4. “Heroin Clinics Improve Addicts’ Lives.” Sciencenordic.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article shows that the heroin clinics have lower dropout rates and that many positive things that have come from them.

How It Was Used I used all the positive effects to show how a free heroin clinic could benefit society.

5. “Heroin: Effects, Addiction & Treatment Options – Drugs.com.” Effects, Addiction & Treatment Options – Drugs.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article explains how heroin is about 2-3 times more potent than morphine. It also provides information on how it is taken and what the effects are.

How It Was Used: This shows the idea of providing heroin in a safe way and with safe tools.

6. Cost Utility Analysis of co-prescribed heroin compared with methadone maintenance treatment in heroin addicts in two randomized trial

Background: This is a study determined the cost of prescribing heroin to heroin addicts compared to addicts prescribed methadone.  In the end they found that a prescription of heroin along with methadone was cost effective.  It said that patients would save $1133 and take part in crime ever three days to get money for their drug.

How I Used it: I used this article as evidence that a free heroin clinic can be more cost efficient for cities and states.

7. The Only Place That They’ll Inject You With Heroin for Free

Background: This article talks about the free heroin clinics.  It states that illegal drugs have made a costly impact on the country in terms of law enforcement, drug overdoses, and health care.

How I Used it: . It talks about the way it has helped patients and is cheaper to run than a methadone clinic, as well as it being more effective at keeping people coming.  This article will strengthen my paper because of all the ways it shows free heroin to be beneficial.

8. Heroin Addiction and Crime

Background: The article tells about crime related to heroin addiction.  It tells of the connection between violent crime and heroin addicts as well as the correlation between decision making and heroin abuse.

How I Used it:  This article will help me argue that it is beneficial to keep addicts on heroin because of the crimes they can commit because they need their fix.  It will cost less to give out free heroin with taxpayer money than it would to fix the damages and crimes committed by addicts to get their heroin.

9. Drugs, Brains, and Behavior: The Science of Addiction

Background: The article holds information about addictions and how severely they can effect someone.  It speaks of addictions as a disease and how relapses work.  It covers medical consequences of drug addiction and mentions a broad amount of drugs.

How I Used it:  I spoke of the science behind addiction and what it would take to get an addict off of heroin.  This helped me show how serious addiction is and how much addiction can cost medically.

10.  DrugFacts-Understanding Drug Use and Addiction

Background: This explains the meaning behind addiction and tells us why some people become addicted to drugs. This also explains what happens to the brain when someone is addicted.

How I Used It: I spoke about how addiction is a disease that is difficult to control and how the brain is affected.

Bibliography – BTB100

  1. Lt. Gen. Clarence E. McKnight, Jr. The Huffington Post “The U.S. Should Intervene in Syria in a Big Way” September 2015. November 11 2016. Web

Background: This article describes the problems that is occurring in Syria, and what each country is doing to intervene with the situation. It focuses on the problem with these Syrians coming into the U.S.

How I used it: I used this article to help support my claims that we should not get involved with Syria. But also I used this article as a counter argument and how his ideas I used as a rebuttal to help support my claims, and how attacking Syria would lead to more problems.   

  1. Spencer, Richard. The Telegraph “How Syria and the bloody conflict has torn the UN Security Council apart” October 7 2015. November 11 2016. Web

Background: This article describes the United Nations idea and position on this problem since they were ultimately created to help prevent wars and promise a better future for the people.

How I used it: I used this article to help support my claim that other countries are getting involved with Syria. While reading this I found that there would be more problems with outside countries also getting involved, due to different idea on how to handle the situation, by The U.S getting involved they may start more problems with China Russia and many other superpowers around the world.

  1. Youssef, Nancy. The Daily Beast “U.S admits it Bombed Syrian Troops.”  Sep 18 2016. Nov 20. 2016. Web

Background: This article describes the failed attempt The U.S had on attacking Syria and how it really benefited terrorism instead of destroying them.

How I used it: I used this article by helping me explain how attacking them would cause more problems for The U.S rather than preventing the problem.  As it said so in the article it goes on to say it builds up ISIS’ confidence and made them feel stronger by such an awful attack. So instead of making the opponent feel down the attack made them feel better.

  1. Riffkin, Rebecca. Gallup “Americans Name Terrorism as No. 1 U.S. Problem” November 3 2016. December 14 2015. Web

Background: In this article it describes the citizens biggest problem, as well as a survey to describe what the people fear is the biggest problem that is occurring in The U.S. It focuses on the people’s idea rather then the government and gives the people a voice of a problem.

How I used it: I used this article to give me an idea of what the percentage is that the people believe to be the biggest problem in The U.S and by doing so I got a better idea on what fears the citizens have. I learned that one in every six citizens feared terrorism and by the ratio, by doing so I was able to focus my attention of problems that are occurring now in days with our country and terrorism.

  1. Fantz, Ashley. CNN “ More than half the nation’s governors say Syrian refugees not welcome” november 3 2016. November 2015. Web

Background: This article is about why Syrian refugees are not welcomed in the U.S the problems that they cause and occur while having them in our borders.

How I used it: I used this article by providing information about The U.S and how individual state feel about letting Syrians into the country and the problems that each of these states feel could be a problem. By looking into this article I was able to find that a majority of the states can agree that they want nothing to do with the Syrian people. Based on the attacks around the world that have occurred in the past few years also helps solidify the reasons for these states decisions.

  1. Rosenthal, Max. Mother Jones “Here’s What Republicans Don’t Get About Refugees” November 3 2016. November 17 2015. Web

Background: This article is about the actual Syrian refugees entering countries with a false passport and how they are getting into certain countries so easily.

How I used it: This article helped me get information on how these Syrians are getting into these countries with false passport. I used this article as a counter argument such as how Obama claimed every country is taking extra precaution on who they are letting in, but if that’s the case how is there still Syrian refugees coming in with fake passports. This just helps prove that if the government can’t be 100% positive on who they let in then the Syrians shouldn’t be aloud here at all.

  1. Miller, Jake. CBS “How do Americans feel about U.S. involvement in foreign crises?” Sep 14, 2014. Oct 30,2016. Web                                                   

Background: This article is about how the citizens of America feel about getting involved with any foreign affair at all. Which includes the results of most Americans to stay out of foreign affiliations.

How I used it: I learned the percentages of the American people and how they feel about the idea of foreign affairs. Based off the results many felt that even though The U.S is considered to be the strongest military they people still felt that they should let other countries deal with there own problem for which the citizens rather have other problems fixed in The U.S before getting involved elsewhere.

  1. Sanger, David. The New York Times “Donald Trump Likely to End Aid for The Rebels Fighting Syrian Government.”  Nov. 18 2015. Nov 19 2016. Web                                                   

Background: This article is based off president to be Donald Trump and his ideas on the conflict going on in Syria, as well as his idea to stop aiding Syria and pull American troops out of the country.

How I used it: From this article I was able to show the outside conflict that occurs while getting involved with Syria such as problems with Russia in particular. In the article Trump explains and believes that The U.S doesn’t need to get involved because there is the likes of Russia and Iran who are getting involved who he believes can turn the tide around and end the problems going on there.

  1. Berman, Russell. The Atlantic “Can ISIS Terrorists Really Infiltrate The Syrian Refugee Program?” Nov 18 2015. Nov 20 2016. Web.

Background: This article is about the refugees that The U.S has let in since 9/11 and how there were some refugees that got caught doing terrorist acts and planning attacks.

How I used it: I discussed how we don’t have a perfect government who catch every little problem that goes on and do make many errors, which could be a terrorist attack. If the U.S has already caught refugees planning attacks there is a good chance that some have gotten away and never been caught yet. So The U.S is aware of making mistakes of letting in terrorist refugees and if they know that, then they might as well protect the people as much as they can from the errors they made which would be closing borders for these refugees. 

10.  Amanpour, Christiane. CNN. ” Passport Linked to Terrorist Complicates Syrian Refugee Crisis” Nov 15 2015. Nov 20 2016. Web                                                                                               

Background: This article is about how the bombing that occurred in France was based off a mistake that the French made by letting in a terrorist refugee.

How I used it: France learned the hard way of making a mistake even though they did end up checking the passport and realizing it was a fake, but it was after the damage was occurred. The French people lost many loved one that could have been avoided by proper testing of passports or completely blocking borders. The U.S should learn by other countries mistakes and realize more is at risk then letting in these refugees, the life of their own citizens are now at risk by letting a single terrorist refugee in.

Rebuttal Rewrite

 

Baby fat is only cute when you’re a baby

Nowadays people would rather be comforted with a lie than confronted to face the truth.  “You look great!” It’s time we start being more honest with each other as hard as it may be to swallow.  Instead of letting our youth eat out, and unhealthy regularly we should stop this bad habit before it even starts.  One thing is for sure your body doesn’t break down food the same way it does when you’re younger compared to the way it does when you’re older.  According to conventional wisdom “your resting metabolic rate tends to drop as you age because you lose a small amount of muscle each year.”  As you age whether you realize it or not your metabolism changes drastically over time.  You also get weaker as you get older.  This is why you see professional athletes retire when they no longer have the energy or muscle endurance they did just a few years back.  For example older people tend to have a lower metabolic rate, and also eat and exercise significantly less.  Instead of letting our youth face the consequences later we should introduce them to healthier eating habits before a unhealthy one even starts.

Children, and adults are both fall victim to peer pressure but children are more easily manipulated than the average adult.  According to SFgate “The old adage “you are what you eat” couldn’t be more accurate in an age where unhealthy food is far more accessible than healthy choices for many American children. Over one-third of American children are now overweight and at risk for various associated diseases.”  Most children nowadays go home after school and eat what they can find and cook expediently as they wait for their parents to get home from work.  Majority of parents, like their children would rather prepare or eat something quick regardless if it’s the healthiest option or not.  Children in their adolescent stages could really care less what they eat as long as it tastes good and satisfies their hunger.  Children can suggest but ultimately have no say when what gets put on the table is finalized.  It comes down to either eat what is on the table or starve until tomorrow.  Until they can support themselves parents call the shots.  The parents should be held responsible for their child, and childhood obesity should be considered a crime.

It is time parents are held responsible for their child now more than ever.  Not only does unhealthy eating habits affect them in their youth but carries on to cause serious health problems down the road.  A perfect analogy is what you eat is what you wear.  Unhealthy eating can easily be prevented more times than not.  The media targets children in more ways than not.  Yet parents fail to teach their children the difference between desire and necessity.  Moynihan a medical faculty member at the University of Newcastle states “In a study of 4–7-year-old American children, Galst & White (1976) showed that the more commercial television that was viewed, the more food requests were made to the parent.”  The media is manipulating.  We see something on television and immediately want it.  When we act on impulse it usually leads to a negative outcome we need to start thinking smarter.  Media isn’t all bad lets get that straight but something should be done to start promoting healthier living or getting out more and active compared to today where every other commercial is a fast food, or just anything quick, and cheap.  Sounds pretty American to me.  For example you may be driving back from class or work you want to get food but do not know what to get.  You flip the radio on and hear a sprite commercial with a superstar like LeBron James telling you to buy it, just as that happens you drive past a McDonalds billboard and suddenly you find yourself in the McDonalds drive thru.  The thing is that it’s not and obesity is a serious problem that is affecting way more people than it should.  With that being said it’s not as hard as it seems to introduce your child to a healthier way of life.  Perpetrators who fail to meet these requirements should face a punishment.  Possibly a rehab for weight loss or take a personal training class and pass so they can be a better parent.  Being heavy is not the problem being unhealthy is.  It’s time we do something to reduce this increasingly big problem the United States faces currently today.  It’s not hard to be healthy just ask your doctor and he can steer you in the right direction.

Works Cited

              “Sound Body Sound Mind, Los Angeles, CA.” Sound Body Sound Mind, Los Angeles, CA. UCLAhealth, n.d. Web. 21 Nov.2016.     

Galst, Joann Paley, and Mary Alice White. “The Unhealthy Persuader: The Reinforcing Value of Television and Children’s Purchase-Influencing Attempts at the Supermarket.” Child Development, vol. 47, no. 4, 1976, pp. 1089–1096. http://www.jstor.org/stable/1128446.

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Background: This article discusses the relationship media has with the way people act. The article shows that when the media shows a group of people how bad sugary drinks are they become more informed and then change behaviors. In this specific study they talk about a study done in Oregon where they informed people about how bad sugary drinks are for you and how this campaign helped the people in the area become more knowledgeable and how a large portion of these people stated they would change their ways.

How I used It: I used this source in my research paper to help show how mass media campaigns like the one in this article can be used to educate Americans on the affects sugary drinks have on their health.

2.Cespedes, Andrea. “Benefits of Sports Drinks Like Gatorade and Powerade.” Leaf Group, 09 June 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2016

Background: This article talks about the positive benefits of sports drinks. The author discusses the benefits of electrolytes, carbohydrates and when is a good time to drink these beverages. The article offers vague information and leaves the reader to interpret alot.

How I used It: I used this article in my rebuttal argument as well as my research paper to help prove the point that Americans are lead to believe certain things because of the vagueness associated with different health claims.

3.Childhood Obesity Causes & Consequences.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 19 June 2015. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This article talks about the influence community involvement has on societies behaviors and how that impacts childhood obesity. When it comes to the community’s involvement a lot of causes are based around food. At the end of the article it discusses health risks of childhood obesity.

How I used it: I used this article to show a fact about how many children consume sugary drinks in my definitional argument. I used one of the overwhelming statistics on sugary drinks to help show that sugary drinks are a problem but lacks the complete definition of a sugary drink.

4.Childhood Obesity Facts.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 17 Nov. 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016

Background: The Center for Disease Control released statistics based on Childhood Obesity in 2011-2014.

Facts from the CDC

  • The prevalence of obesity has remained fairly stable at about 17% and affects about 12.7 million children and adolescents.
  • Overall obesity prevalence among children whose adult head of household completed college was approximately half that of those whose adult head of household did not complete high school (9% vs 19% among girls; 11% vs 21% among boys) in 1999–2010.
  • Obesity prevalence was the highest among children in families with an income-to-poverty ratio of 100% or less (household income that is at or below the poverty threshold), followed by those in families with an income-to-poverty ratio of 101%–130%, and then found to be lower in children in families with an income-to-poverty ratio of 131% or larger (greater household income).

How I used it: I used this article in my causal argument and research paper to help readers see how many people are affected by childhood obesity.

5.Gillis, Linda J., and Oded Bar-Or. “Food away from home, sugar-sweetened drink consumption and juvenile obesity.” Journal of the American College of Nutrition22.6 (2003): 539-545.

Background: This article discusses the relationship between people’s diets and their weight. They complete a study in which they found that obese children consume more meat, grains, sugary drinks, and processed food, while also lacking fruits and vegetables in everyday diets. It also talks about the effects that eating out has on the food consumption of children.

How I used it: I used this article to help support the direct correlation between obesity and sugary drink intake based on their study.

6.Go, A. S., D. Mozaffarian, and V. L. Roger. “Sugar-sweetened beverages initiatives can help fight childhood obesity.” circulation 127 (2013): e6-e245.

Background: This article discusses an option for lowering sugary drink consumption by taxing it and shows how it will also help the economy. They also define sugary drinks into types of beverages and talk a little bit about why it is so bad for you.

How I Used it: I used this cite to add onto my definition for my definitional argument and research paper.

7.Harris, Jennifer L., et al. “Evaluating Sugary Drink Nutrition and Marketing to Youth.” New Haven, CT: Yale Rudd Center for Food Policy and Obesity (2011).

Background: This article discusses childhood obesities direct link to sugary drinks and how many of these companies promote this unhealthy life style. While providing general accurate statements it also provides a great deal of statistics to support the fact that sugary drinks are bad for children and yet market directly to them.

How I Used it: I used this article in my Definitional argument to help my argument that it’s hard to determine what is considered good for you and bad for you due to the positive health claims. Unfortunately the claims aren’t always what they seem. I also used it in my definitional argument to help my reader understand why sugary drinks are so bad for people but especially children.

8.Johnson. “How much is too much?” Research. SugarScience.org, 30 Mar. 2014. Web. 5 Dec. 2016.

Background:  In this article they discuss the concern for how much sugar Americans intake against what Americans are actually consuming using lots of facts and statistics.

How I used it: I used this article in my causal argument to help readers see how much sugar should be consumed against how much is actually being consumed.

9. Lynch, Barbara S., and Richard J. Bonnie. “Youth access to tobacco products.” (1994).

Background: This article discusses the usage of tobacco products, especially after the nationwide age restriction.

How I used it: I used this paper to help support my thesis and to prove that by adding an age limitation on the purchase of tobacco the amount of underage smokers went down, therefore the same would happen if America put an age restriction on sugar beverages.

10.Malik, Vasanti S., Matthias B. Schulze, and Frank B. Hu. “Intake of sugar-sweetened beverages and weight gain: a systematic review.” The American journal of clinical nutrition84.2 (2006): 274-288.

Background: This article takes an in depth look at the correlation of sugary drinks and weight gain. The review uses different investigations and studies to come to the conclusion that the intake of sugary beverages are in conjunction with weight gain and obesity in children and adults. It explains that theses beverages also provide little nutritional value and result in incomplete compensation of energy at subsequent meals. Ultimately the conclusion of the article is that these drinks should be discouraged and there needs to be more efforts to promote consumption of healthier beverages.

How I Used it: I used this article in my Causal argument to explain the different factors that play a role in obesity as well as sugary drink consumption.

11.McKinlay, Rodrick D. “Obesity Action Coalition » Childhood Obesity: The Link to Drinks.” Childhood Obesity: The Link to Drinks Comments. Obesity Action Coalition, n.d. Web. 04 Dec. 2016.

Background: This article talks about the effect sugary drinks have on childhood obesity. It discusses how much is consumed and the effect caffeine has as well. It ends by talking about parents roles on changing this problem by adapting a healthier lifestyle as well to role model how to be healthier for the children.

How I used It: I used this article in my causal argument when explaining how much soda is consumed by Americans and how American can start to slowly change this worldwide problem.

12.Ogden, Cynthia . Consumption of Sugar Drinks in the US (2005-2008), et al. . US Department of Health and Human Services, Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, National Center for Health Statistics, 2011.

Background: This article discusses the consumption in kilocalories and the differences of consumption based on age, race, ethnicity, income and location. It also explains how much is consumed and gives a definition for sugary drinks.

How I Used it: I used this article in my definitional argument as it had a very accurate and comprehensible definition to help guide my explanation of what a sugary drink is.

13.”Reducing Consumption of Sugar-sweetened Beverages to Reduce the Risk of Childhood Overweight and Obesity.” Reducing Consumption of Sugar-sweetened Beverages to Reduce the Risk of Childhood Overweight and Obesity. World Health Organization, 24 Aug. 2016. Web. 04 Dec. 2016.

Background: The World Health Organization talks about how sugary drinks are directly linked to obesity. Consumption of these beverages is incredibly high and suggest poor diets. They offer suggestions on how much sugar should be consumed to be considered healthy.

How I used It: I used this article in my causal argument to show proof that sugary drinks are not nutritional and do not help one feel full.

14.Sugary Drinks and Childhood Obesity. Arch Pediatr Adolesc Med. 2009;163(4):400. doi:10.1001/archpediatrics.2009.16

Background: This article discusses how sugary drinks can lead to childhood obesity as well as other diseases. It gives examples of what sugary drinks are and breaks it down into four categories. The article goes over the factors that contribute to this and how they contribute to the cause of other diseases.

How I Used it: I used this article in my definitional argument to provide proof of types and examples of sugary drinks. I also used this article in my causal argument to explain how the body reacts when it has taken in too much sugar at one time.

 

 

 

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Background: The article discusses how a study done by the American Psychological Association concludes that there is a correlation between playing violent video games and an increase in aggression. There is also a decrease in empathy among gamers.

How I Used It: I used this evidence to establish that while there is a link between increasing aggression and violent video games, there is no link between violent video games and increasing aggressive behavior that directly involves criminal activity or violent offenses. Aggression is a broad term and does not always mean physical altercations. It could be as simple as lying or throwing a tantrum.

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Background: This document establishes what aggression exactly is. It is defined as “a persistent pattern of behavior that causes or threatens harm to other people.” Forms of aggression include verbal, physical, instrumental, reactive, proactive, overt, covert, and indirect.

How I Used It: I used this document to explain that while video games may increase aggression, there are so many forms of aggression that it is not a clear indication of video games leading to violent offenses. Violent video games may only increase the chances of throwing a tantrum or lying to somebody.

  1. Greitemeyer, Tobias, and Christina Sagioglou. “Subjective Socioeconomic Status Causes Aggression: A Test Of The Theory Of Social Deprivation.” Journal Of Personality And Social Psychology 111.2 (2016): 178-194. PsycARTICLES. Web. 6 Nov. 2016.

Background: This was a study performed to see if socioeconomic classes determine how aggressive someone can be. Through the study, it was found that a lower socioeconomic class generally led to a higher level of aggression among individuals.

How I Used It: I used this study to show that there are other things that increase aggression that would come off as unflattering to those involved with it. These same people may want to blame video games to avoid accusations on themselves. In this instance, it would be the government since their systems have led to many people being stuck in the working class, which in turn would lead to their increase in aggressive behavior.

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Background: This study shows that negative parenting when a child is still an infant will lead to an aggressive personality later on.

How I Used It: Parents tend to blame video games for a child’s aggressive behavior, but it may just be a way of diverting attention from them. This study proves that a parent who is poorly raising their child, specifically earlier on, will have a more aggressive kid. This may raise concern about the parent, which is why they would want to get rid of the attention and pin any crimes on video games.

  1. Entertainment Software Association, “Essential Facts About Games and Violence,http://www.theesa.com, 2008

Background: This is a graph showing the increase in video game sales while showing the slight decrease in violent crime offenses.

How I Used It: I used this evidence to prove that the correlation between video games and violent crimes is seemingly illogical. If more people are getting their hands on violent video games and these games are supposedly increasing violent behavior, then the rate of crimes should be going up. However, that is not the case.

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Background: This is an article about William and Joshua Buckner who shot at cars which led to deaths and injuries. They had claimed that Grand Theft Auto inspired them to perform the crime which in turn led to the increased belief that violent video games were causing more crimes.

How I Used It: I used this article to establish that there are often instances of the criminals themselves claiming that the games are what caused them to commit the crimes.

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Background: An essay about why people will blame others for the actions that they committed. In the essay, James Fleck explains that people will blame others as a natural reaction to avoid having negative attention on themselves.

How I Used It: I used this essay to invalidate the testimonies of William and Joshua Buckner, and people like them who will claim that video games are why they committed the crime. This essay shows that blaming is something everyone does to avoid negative attention. It does not have to be true; it just has to work.

  1. Adam Thierer, MA, “Video Games, Ratings, Parental Controls, & Public Policy: Where Do We Stand?,http://www.pff.org, Apr. 2008

Background: This is a graph indicating the increase in video game ratings awareness and whether parents utilize them. It shows that their awareness and usage is increasing over time.

How I Used It: I used this graph to show that for the most part, the youth are being protected from violent video games. While I do not believe they lead to aggressive behavior, this shows that most youth are not even playing games with content that is too mature for them.

  1. A Timeline of Video Game Controversies.” National Coalition Against Censorship. N.p., 2016. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: This is a timeline indicating the most notable instances of video game controversies, most of which dealing with real world violence.

How I Used It: I used this timeline to establish the history of violent video games and the belief that they lead to violent behavior.

  1. Kerstetter, Jim. “Why Do We Blame Games for Real-world Violence?” CNET. N.p., 26 Feb. 2013. Web. 30 Nov. 2016.

Background: Out of 2278 US adults, a third say they will let their child play anything that they want. Whether it is violent or too mature for the kid does not matter to them at all.

How I Used It: I do not believe that violent video games lead to criminal activity, but I do believe that bad parenting may have more to do with it. The fact that these parents have little care for what their child plays, may also mean they are negatively parenting them.