Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of our money under our mattress or around our house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of our money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. We don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, we don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to our bank account, and we just have to trust that we have more money.
Robust Verbs Jonhjelly
In Vancouver we have a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is a large crime rate because of the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through the day. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, Nothing will stop them from doing whatever they must to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. It seems to be no limit for these addicts to go through to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.
E11: Robust Subjects and Verbs — ChandlerBing
Vancouver suffers from a plentiful amount of heroin addicts committing crimes (such as breaking and entering and robbery) to support their unfavorable habits. A new controversial program provides addicts with free heroin as a way to aid heroin users. Using heroin consumes the users life, turning into an obsession that they are unable to live without. Finding jobs, day-to-day interactions and maintaining relationships become all too difficult for the user because they invest all of their time finding ways to obtain heroin. Weaning users off heroin is not the programs intent; in fact, it is only trying to reduce the rising crime rate in Vancouver. Many heroin users cannot afford expensive hospital bills when they overdose and hospitals should not have to deal with people who choose to use the drug. The program gives users heroin in the cleanest way possible by providing clean heroin and clean needles to prevent the spread of blood-borne diseases. The city’s crime rate will reduce but heroin addicts still have a long and difficult road in front of them.
Enough about you – Princess45
Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of the money under the mattress or around the house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. We don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, we don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to the bank account, and we just have to trust that we got more money.
Robust Verbs- Theadmiral
In Vancouver, a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits has ARISEN. Although crime rates are at an all time high because of these addicts, the “free heroin for addicts” program has aided in helping people with this addiction. For an addict, getting through the day can be hard because their addiction is so strong, and often makes it difficult to interact in their places of work, with friends, and have relationships. Because their addiction cannot be broken, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. Breaking and entering, and theft are only some of the crimes these users will commit for their fix. No limits exist as to where they will go to retrieve this drug so their addiction can be fed. Even though the program has the right idea, and helping out the crime rates, we are not helping those addicted to heroin. By providing drugs to users, they will not have to commit the minor crimes for money or drugs. The “free heroin for addicts” program will also provide needles and a safe using environment, so the hospitals do not have to get involved. The program will help clean up the city of Vancouver, but not the lives of users.
Robust Verbs – theintern
Vancouver has a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop these addicts. Large crime starts with the problem of many addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the drugs they are using. Heroin users are so addicted to the drug that they’ll do anything to get their hands on the drug. The crimes mostly committed are within stealing from others either of breaking in or entering. Addicts have no limit, they must feed their addiction in anyway possible. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The programs main goal is to keep the crimes rates down. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.
Enough about you—todayistheday19
Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much without it. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it is not physically present. In today’s society there must be faith in the government and the banking system. We have to trust that our money is being handled in the proper manner and not being stolen. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. An individual doesn’t actually see their money being transferred. When they get paid, they, typically, aren’t handed cash. They either receive a pay check or the money is directly transferred into their bank account. One just has to trust that they paid.
Robust Verbs- Yoshi
There is a huge problem in Vancouver, concerning heroin addicts. A program was designed, that gave the addicts free heroin. Even with the “free heroin for addicts” project crime rates continue to rise. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. The program does not help addicts avoid heroin. The program does however, help the streets of Vancouver become a better place with less crime. Heroin users also fill the hospital because of their infections from dirty needles. The program gives addicts free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The ‘free heroin for addicts” program will in turn fix the city, but not the addiction that these people face.
Enough About You- Yoshi
Money seems to have a big role in today’s society; without money it is hard to do much or get far in life. Money is valuable in different ways, even if it is not presented physically. In today’s society there must be faith in the government and in the banking system that money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then money would have to be hidden under a mattress or around the house. What happens in the bank is a mystery, and what they do with all the money they receive is a mystery. Most people presume either you have money or you don’t, and that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. Money doesn’t have to be seen, to be considered real. On pay day, money usually just gets transferred to bank accounts, no one receives an actual check anymore, there just has to be trust in the bank that more money was deposited.
Robust Verbs – rainbow987
There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.
Revised with Robust Verbs:
In Vancouver, heroin addicts often commit crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program attempts to do everything it can to stop the addicts. Unfortunately, the large crime rate due to the addicts proves problematic. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Addicts struggle with daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships. Heroin users will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. Users may commit crimes such as breaking and entering or stealing. The program won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The program only helps to save the city from rising crime rates. Addicts will be off the streets if given the drug, resulting in a lower number of street crimes. In addition, less heroin users require hospitalization. Hospitals should not have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles.The program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The idea of the program helps to fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.