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Practice Opening:

“You play ball like a girl!” This used to be one of the worst insults of all time. In today’s day, it is quite a complement. Softball seemed as only the girl version of baseball. The girl’s who couldn’t compete with “the big guys,” played softball. That underhand pitch, the size of the field, how much bigger the ball is, seems easy. In reality, it just makes it harder. Recent studies shown us how much harder hitting a softball is than hitting an over-hand pitch of a baseball. The angle, speed, distance, and spin are just a few aspects of the windmill pitch’s difficulty. In reality, hitting a 95 mph, over-hand baseball pitch from 60 feet away is more difficult than hitting a 65 mph, windmill softball pitch from 43 feet away.

Practice Opening:

Has anyone ever really heard of a famous fast-pitch softball hitter? We hear about baseball homers all the time. The reason we don’t know about quality softball hitters is because there aren’t any. There are many more aspects about the windmill pitch that make it much more difficult than hitting an over-hand baseball pitch. The angle, speed, distance, and spin of the ball coming to the batter is completely different than baseball. The only true similarity of the two sports are the rules. Though people think softball is the easier version of baseball, it is not.

Purposeful Summary: Baseball vs. Softball: Which is Harder to Hit? by Kyle Odegard

We all know that softball is simply the “girl version” of baseball. The field is smaller, the ball is bigger, and the uniforms are quite different. Most believe that because of some of the few differences, this would make playing the game much easier. Girls are underestimated pretty often, but when it comes to softball, there is much empowerment. When baseball and softball get compared, most would always go into saying how much baseball is harder. The field is big, the ball is small and white, and the pitching is faster. All these descriptions are true, but it doesn’t make the sport any harder than softball.

Softball will never be harder than baseball, though the differences are important. Focusing on just the pitching, there are major aspects that make each sport unique. Baseball’s pitching style is an over hand throw to the strike zone. Due to this, the ball travels on a downward angle. The diameter of the ball is just under three inches. The distance from the pitching mound and home plate is 60 feet.

In softball the ball is much bigger. It is about three and a half inches in diameter. The pitcher’s mound is only 43 feet from home plate. Softball pitchers are known for their lever of an arm. They swing their arm over their head and flick the ball at their hip as fast as they can. Because of the low release point, the ball must travel up to past the strike zone.

The significance of these differences is how it changes the difficulty level. Due to the softball rise ball, and the batter natural movement of dropping the bat when swinging makes the batters percentage of hitting the ball productively go down tremendously. In softball, not only does the pitch rise, but it is also pitched at the distance of only 43 feet. That is only where the mound is placed. After the big leap off the mound and the intimidating windmill, the pitcher ends up about 38 feet away from the batter. This makes the reaction time to see the ball and to hit it super short.

Baseball’s pitching has only a few difficulties, but the main one is a size of the ball. Because of it’s small shape, the ball has a better chance of having movement. The pitcher can hold the ball a curtain way, and can make the ball do some crazy movements while approaching  the strike zone. This makes the batter have to make sure the ball won’t be out of the strike zone by the time it gets there.

Quote Collection: 

“From a physics point of view they differ only in details.” Alan Nathan, physics professor at Illinois.

“If you drop your hands to ht it, game over.” Tony Scoglio, professional baseball baseball/softball instructor.

“The best way to hit a rise ball is to take it.” Kyle Odegard

Purposeful Summary: The Great Debate: Baseball vs. Softball, Jen Yee

Hitting a ball coming at the strike zone at 65 mph causes the batter to see the ball so quickly that they need to have amazing hand-eye coordination. The ciliary muscles in the eye takes time to contract and relax to see an object far, to close. During a baseball or softball game, this has to happen super fast. Though that takes time, finding the ball in the air takes time too. During both kind of pitching, the ball is blocked by the pitchers body, therefor, the batter can’t see the ball until it is already in the air. This makes the eye muscles have to work even faster to see the ball and see it come closer.

To make this process quicker, the batter has to focus on a point in space that they assume the ball will come from. It can be easier to look at the pitchers release point. In baseball, this might be easier because the release point in next to their head, but in softball, the release point is by their hip.

Purposeful Summary: The Softer They Come. Why is it so hard to hit a softball? Rob Neyer

When focusing on the history of these sports, there are easy way to distinguish why softball can be harder. While comparing the sports in the Olympics, baseball teams score an average of 7.65 runs per game, while the softball team would score only an average of 3.8 runs. This could mean that the batters were unable to produce more solid hits of the pitchers to score more runs.

Softball pitchers like Jennie Finch and Lisa Fernandez are complete power players. Their 70 mph fastballs are as equal to mid 90s fastballs are in baseball. Both of these pitchers have a history of facing power MLB hitters. They both have almost a 100% success rate on striking them out. Of course baseball coaches had their players try to use the effective windmill pitching, but when they read to rule book, it is illegal in baseball. Softball is the only sport with this kind of motion.

Quotation Collection:

“When great players face off, softball is clearly a pitcher’s game.” Rob Neyer

“In softball, there are no famous hitters, only famous pitchers.” Rob Neyer

“1905 World Series, New York Giants legend Christy Mathewson tossed 3 shutouts allowing only 14 hits in 27 innings. That’s roughly what Finch, Fernandez and Osterman did these two weeks.” Rob Neyer

Purposeful Summary: Throw like a girl, Jennie Finch, pages 166-168.

While Major league is all professional and high tech, softball pitching effects baseball batters way differently than their average overhand throw. Jennie Finch is the most famous softball player in the world. She is a gold medalist and named Athlete of the Year in 2010.

She was asked to co-host Major League Baseball’s weekly show, “This Week in Baseball.” She was on the segment called Pinch, Hit, and Run with Jennie Finch. During this, she was challenged to pitch against a several dozen of major league batters. She has struck out over 35 hitter, including Mike Piazza and Albert Pujols. She could have faced more batters but they rather protect their reputation than get shown off by a girl. They didn’t want to go through that shame.

Purposeful Summary: Softball Pitch vs. Baseball Pitch (Youtube Video) by Egreensoftball

This video shows some test that were done to compare which kind of pitch has more force and difficulty level. The first test was to have one softball pitcher and one baseball pitcher to throw the ball at scientific gear that measures the ball’s impact. Baseball pitcher, Adam Jorgenson, pitched first. His 95 mph faseball created 2,411 pounds of force. Next was softball pitcher, Jennie Finch. Her 70 mph softball created the scientific gear to shatter and completely break the machine. This makes her pitch unmeasurable. In this first test, softball would be the winner here.

The next test was to pitch against a professional batter. Batter, Brain Byrne, hit 95 mph fastballs with no problem, though when it comes to the windmill fast pitch softball, it can’t be touched. This proves that even professionals have trouble with hitting a softball.

Next, they scientist went back to the computers. The measured all aspects of the baseball and softball pitches. From the distance, the speed, and the angle, the studied which pitch is harder to hit. After the measuring and the math, they stated that a baseball batter has .395 milliseconds to react to the pitch, while a softball batter has .350 milliseconds to react. This makes the softball batter have less time to think about the pitch, making it more difficult to make contact with the ball.

Lastly, Jennie Finch was tested in how she throws her pitches. She was decked up in motion capture technology to measure her movements. The state that her arm acts a 3 foot leaver for the ball. Because the ball is released at her hip, the ball must go high. This makes it harder for a batter to hit. Overall, these studies indicate that softball is the harder ball to hit.

Working Hypothesis: 

A softball pitcher is harder to hit than hitting a baseball pitcher.

Working Hypothesis:

The aspects of hitting a softball are more difficult than hitting a baseball.

Counter Arguments: 

  • Professional baseball hitters are professional for a reason, they are supposed to know how to hit a 95 mph baseball pitcher. Because they have difficult hitting a softball, is because they don’t practice that as much as baseball. If they practiced hitting a softball the same amount of time they do to hit a baseball, their percentages of hitting the softball would go up.
  • Hitting a softball and baseball are only harder when they are faster pitched. It makes hitting any ball harder when they are pitched over 95 and 65 mph.
  • All players hit and see the ball differently, and that is hard to measure.

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http://www.pri.org/stories/2015-02-04/vancouver-combats-heroin-giving-its-addicts-best-smack-world

“For people who are in that position, where methadone doesn’t work for them, and have tried various times to kick the heroin habit and failed, it’s been determined by a set of medical practitioners to practice what they call ‘harm reduction,'”

“The harm-reduction program of giving heroin addict heroin has its origins in Europe with countries like Switzerland, Germany, Britain and the Netherlands all administering their own version of the program in Vancouver, according to a detailed report in Time back in 2009. And just like Vancouver, the program is only for those with the very worst addictions.”

 

https://www.bustle.com/articles/50901-prescription-heroin-in-vancouver-will-be-handed-to-addicts-in-a-game-changing-experiment

“Although it’s unclear what Vancouver’s brave new venture will accomplish, it’s safe to assume that the city is inclined to take a crack at different methods to help its most susceptible population.”

“Following a successful clinical trial on 26 participants, doctors at the Providence Crosstown Clinic will be allowed to administer the drug to a group of 120 (“severely addicted people,”)”

 

http://content.time.com/time/health/article/0,8599,1926160,00.html

“It’s a less than perfect treatment, but for entrenched addicts, it gives them the first steps toward getting their life together,” says John Strang, a researcher with the National Addiction Centre and King’s Health Partners in London”

 

http://sciencenordic.com/heroin-clinics-improve-addicts-lives

“Danish heroin addicts experience significant improvements in their lives. They no longer need to stress over finding the next fix and they commit fewer crimes.”

“Some of the users have better contact with their families. Some have started to do sports as part of the treatment offer, and others have found the energy to take care of their own physical illnesses,”

 

https://www.drugs.com/illicit/heroin.html

“Heroin (diacetylmorphine) is derived from the morphine alkaloid found in opium and is roughly 2-3 times more potent. A highly addictive drug, heroin exhibits euphoric (“rush”), anxiolytic and analgesic central nervous system properties”

A07 White Paper- yankeeskid6

  1. Working Hypothesis

Police brutality is falsely represented in media and therefore gives officers a bad rep.

2. Working Hypothesis

Statistics show that police brutality in retrospect to racial profiling actually has very minimal correlation to each other.

Arguments:

Classification- All isn’t lost in retrieving police officers respect from the African American community or any minority community n that matter. There has been plenty of stories and example of officers helping out under privileged civilians. There have been many cases where a white officer looked out for and stuck by a black males side during hardship. This brings us back to the social media issue and news stations They only cover what seems to be controversial stories because those are what stir things up. So if the media changes its outlooks the perspective of the public may change too.

Cause/Effect- Since the death toll by police on African Americans in somewhere around 25% but the general population percentage of African Americans is much lower that makes people think though by statistics whites are killed more by police the black communities suffer more because they population deteriorates.

Current State Of Research Paper:

I believe my research has been plausible and concrete. The data I have collected is compelling; it shows how much the modern day media is wrong. I feel the research and paper itself is developing well. The final product of my research paper should prove that 1. the media dramatizes news and selects certain stories to keep public perspective a certain way and 2. the real notion of police brutality is that whites actually fall victim to police shootings more than any race. I hope the paper is an eye opener.

 

White Paper – scarletthief

Opening:

Self-identification of race encounters more opposition than self-identification of gender in America. We easily accepted Bruce Jenner identifying as a woman in 2015, but shunned Rachel Dolezal, a Caucasian-born woman, for identifying as African-American in that same year. Half of the Millennial generation acknowledge the idea that “gender is a spectrum” instead of just male or female; cities and public establishments have created no-gender ID cards and bathrooms to accommodate for all genders. So what makes choosing our race so different? One example would be that there are benefits to being a certain race, such as earning college scholarships by identifying as African-American. Many see this as unfair to real African-Americans who are eligible to the scholarships – no scholarship means no education. America separates race as White (non-hispanic), African American, Hispanic, Latino, Asian, Pacific Islander, Native American, Alaskan Native, and bi- and multiracial and we are expected to choose our race when filling out applications and censuses. But if others don’t agree with our choice, then what race are we?

Point I want to make at some point in the work:
Transracial adoptees are often confused about which race they should identify as: the race of their adopted family or their biological origin.

WHAT MAKES GENDER IDENTIFICATION AND RACE IDENTIFICATION DIFFERENT?

http://www.npr.org/sections/parallels/2016/09/29/495665329/for-affirmative-action-brazil-sets-up-controversial-boards-to-determine-race

For Affirmative Action, Brazil Sets Up Controversial Boards To Determine Race

  • 27 year old Lucas Siquiera took the Foreign Service exam to join Brazil’s Ministry of Foreign Affairs
  • He considers himself to be mixed race, known in Brazil as pardo, or brown.
  • Father’s family: grandfather is black, grandmother, Indian and white.
  • Mother’s family: mostly white Portuguese
  • self identified as mixed race on his application. 20% of the government’s positions must be filled with people of color: mixed race or black
  • People saw Siqueira’s photos on social media and said he was a white and a fraud who lied to get a job in the government
  • Brazil government had to rethink their job offer
  • a committee of 7 diplomats were gathered to review his case and decided he was NOT mixed race with NO explanation
  • Siqueira sued them and in order to prove his Afro-Brazilian roots had to do tests to categorize his skin color on different sections of his body.
  • He was considered to be white b/c of his physical looks, but his racial identity “is made up of more than just physical characteristics”
  • Racial tribunals (court/jury/panel/etc) are now mandatory for all government jobs
    • measuring lip size, hair texture, nose width, and other racial stereotypes
  • U.S. “one drop rule” means one drop of Black blood means you are Black
  • Brazil says skin tone is more important than race because its population is very diverse.
  • Siqueira doesn’t support the the racial tribunals.
  • He is neither fully black or fully white, but in the middle.

http://www.npr.org/sections/thetwo-way/2015/06/15/414655045/rachel-dolezal-resigns-as-president-of-spokane-naacp

Rachel Dolezal Resigns As President Of Spokane NAACP

  • Rachel Dolezal he had been presenting herself as being of mixed race when she was really born to white parents.
  • Over her time at the NAACP, Dolezal had become a prominent figure in the civil rights movement.
  • NAACP afterward said “One’s racial identity is not a qualifying criteria or disqualifying standard for NAACP leadership,” supporting her.

http://www.npr.org/sections/codeswitch/2015/03/23/394789419/family-secret-and-cultural-identity-revealed-in-little-white-lie

Family Secret and Cultural Identity Revealed In ‘Little White Lie’

  • Lacey Schwartz who has darker skin tone and curly hair, different from her parents, grew up in a white community
  • Parents are white and Jewish and said her color came from a dark, Sicilian grandfather
  • She grew up thinking she was white
  • Found out Lacey’s mother had an affair with a black man and never told Lacey
  • Needed to clarify her racial identity for college application and was accepted as an African American student based on her photo, despite not choosing a race on the application.
  • Georgetown University decided she was African American based on physical attributes
  • She made friends with other AA students and felt like she “belonged”
  • now identifies as black when she once identified as black

http://www.alleydog.com/glossary/definition.php?term=Gender%20Identity

Gender Identity

Gender identity is one’s own perception or sense of being male or female. Please do not confuse this with sexual orientation (as heterosexual or homosexual) or the strength of one’s gender-typing; it is just a person’s own knowledge and feelings of being a male or female.

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/06/14/us/14admissions.html?_r=0

http://www.npr.org/sections/itsallpolitics/2012/05/16/152822762/minority-rules-who-gets-to-claim-status-as-a-person-of-color

Links to check out:

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Content Descriptions

  • The Observational Study of Standardized Testing in Kindergarten
  • Testing Bias and Testing Validity
  • Minority Students vs. Standardized Testing
  • Bias in Testing Questions

The Observational Study of Standardized Testing in Kindergarten

  • Districts specifically attempting to raise standardized testing scores had a higher rate of teacher procedural variation, unauthorized repetition, and cues for correct answers.
    • Procedural variations define as “variations which could change the substance of the test and/or the children’s performance.”
    • Teachers involved in a program to raise achievement for low socioeconomic towns had high variation percentages of 44% and 14% compared to the other schools in the study which had a variation percentage averaging 2.8%.
    • Teachers involved in the achievement program had cueing the correct answer percentages of 24% and 9% compared to the other kindergartens with a percentage averaging 1%.
  • Districts in lower-middle class towns had a higher rate of procedural variation than wealthier districts. These variations make the tests incomparable.
  • In one instance, “At no time during the testing of 17 children in three separate testing sessions did this teacher instruct the children to close their eyes and listen. The teacher simply read the names of the objects for each item while the children with their eyes open selected the matching choice box. Obviously, this omission rendered the test invalid as a measure of the auditory memory construct.”

Testing Bias and Testing Validity

  • Quote collection:
    • “Biases and inequities certainly exist – but standardized tests do not merely reflect their impact; they compound them.”
    • “These tests tend to reflect the language, culture, or learning style of middle- to upper-class whites. Thus scores on these tests are as much measures of race or ethnicity and income as they are measures of achievement, ability, or skill.”
  • Many of the states have now begun programs that seek to “align” school curriculum with the standardized test given. The purpose of this is to not waste time teaching topics that students will never be tested on. This not only undermines the value of education, but it undermines the value of standardized testing. The purpose of these tests are to evaluate curriculum as well as the students so aligning the curriculum would ruin that purpose.

Minority Students vs. Standardized Tests

  • Standardized testing is merely a way to rationalize discriminatory practices. Some view low minority test scores as a way to show that minorities are intellectually inferior to whites. Rather, it is argued that the tests favor white people and that accounts for the difference in scores.
  • Traditionally, those writing the exams are middle class white people. Their style of thinking, values, and dialect varies greatly from someone from a lower socioeconomic class. White middle-class writers bring in their own biases which reflect the type of schooling they received.
  • “In one study of black fourth graders, using Gray’s Oral Reading Test, it was found that when the test was scored according to the regular key, 46 per cent of the errors made by the total group could be attributed to dialect difference.”
  • In many reading portions, there are questions that are meant to be answered based on “common knowledge” instead of the passage given. “Common knowledge” in many cases means white middle class common knowledge.

Bias in Testing Questions

A plant’s fruit always contains seeds. Which of the items below is not a fruit? A. Pumpkin B. Orange C. Apple D.Celery

  • This is an example of a question from a 6th grade standardized test. This question reaches beyond academic knowledge and moves more towards lifestyle knowledge. A child that wasn’t exposed to pumpkins or celery would get this wrong whereas a child who has eaten all of them should know the answer. “Common knowledge” is a big form of bias.

Working Hypothesis 1

Standardized tests are not a reliable and accurate way to measure student achievement. The stakes that are being put on these tests are tremendously misleading considering the bias and inequity surrounding them. High-stake testing undermines the vast goals of schools in creating well rounded students beyond academics.

1a. Working Hypothesis 2

Standardized testing reflects areas of inequity in school quality but does not create the bias. The bias already exists and standardized testing only brings it to light and is a way to measure it. Therefore, the tests could be beneficial to identifying the inequities and improving school quality in areas that perform low on standardized tests. 

2. Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/Classification Argument

The idea that standardized tests create an equal playing field for students is a misunderstanding among many educators. The word equal would have to be redefined in order to be correct.

Cause/Effect Argument

Research could be done to analyze the effect that low/high standardized test scores have on college admission.

Rebuttal Argument

Differences in scores among different economic groups reflects only the difference in intellectual abilities not other environmental factors.

3. Current State of the Research Paper

I feel like I have good sources so far for my paper that provide a lot of research that backs up my thesis. My opinion on my topic has not changed since I started but is now backed up by many studies. I’ve also found that my topic is a lot more complex than I had thought and there are a lot of idiosyncrasies that I had not considered before. I think I have a pretty good understanding on the topic now that I’ve done some research on it.

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Content descriptions:

Sexual Awakenings are Enhanced by Tinder

When people hear the word college a few things come to mind: exams, hefty student loans, and maybe even sexual promiscuity. The liberation of high school graduates into an arena of simulated independence gives an opportunity for sexual expression as well as exploration. That being said, the existence of dating apps like Tinder, give college students an even easier time at finding consenting partners to do so.

Monogamy is Discouraged by Tinder

In addition to aiding students in finding sexual counterparts, it also seems to encourage hookups and random meetings as opposed to steady and secure relationships. More and more college age students are preferring to live bachelor or bachelorette lifestyles instead of settling down with someone. With dating apps that literally provide thousands of willing partners with the swipe of a finger, it is no wonder why people don’t see the point of buying the cow anymore when they can literally get the milk for free.

Tinder Causes Low Self Esteem

This aspect may come out of nowhere, especially when looking at my other ideas, but it does have its place. An important part of relationships is oneself, as RuPaul puts it “If you don’t love yourself, how in the hell you gonna love somebody else?”. Tinder commodomizes our sexuality, the fact that a person can deem another’s worth with a swipe left or right, is and should be concerning. Not only that, but the aftermath of prolonged sexual promiscuity is found to be a sign of low self-esteem, and the two often go hand in hand.

1.) Working Hypothesis one:

Dating apps like Tinder have created a more predominant hookup culture that thrives on college campuses.

1a.) Working Hypothesis two:

College is a time of exploration and freedom, and Tinder can help a student to navigate their sexual awakening.

2.) Topic for Smaller Papers

The Difference Between Dating Sites and Dating Apps

Websites like match.com and eharmony proudly boast about high levels of “second dates” and even successful marriages. This could be attributed to the culture they themselves hold. A dating site, not only can require financial investment, but personal investment as well. A person would have to sit down, take time, and have a meaningful conversation with their matches. While a dating app can be quickly installed on a cell phone (often for free) and dozens of matches can be made within seconds often based on looks alone.

Cause and Effect Argument

I mentioned earlier about the relationship between Tinder and low self-esteem. When people are college aged (18-22ish) they are still battling with rampant issues dealing with self image and self love. Accessing an app like Tinder may seem like an outlet for cheap sex and approval, but typically ends up exacerbating any pre-existing dissatisfaction.

Rebuttal Argument

On the contrary, Tinder is encouraging college students (many of whom can become anti-social during their educational years) to go out and meet new people. In addition, there is no guarantee that a Tinder date will not lead to a steady relationship, it just seems as though evidence proves otherwise.

3.) Current State of Research

I am looking forward to writing this paper, at first I picked the topic out of a whim, but now I have found there is a lot more available for me. There are quite a few articles I have already found to be quite detailed and helpful in supporting my arguments. There are also many angles I can choose to make those arguments from. In addition, the topic is so relevant that I can pull in many media references that will help the reader to internalize the information and really identify with my content.

 

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Content Descriptions

  • Why do preachers/dissenters dislike  Rock ‘n’ roll

Top 10 reasons why God hates rock music. – The Landover Baptist …

Rock ‘n’roll highlights values against what is taught in religion.

RELIGIOUS ROCK… The music of devils in the CHURCH

“We are told by the religious rockers that we must look and sound like the world in order to reach the youth of this generation. They say, many young people will not listen to the gospel or come to church so we must meet them on some common ground. That common ground is rock and roll. In other words, they are saying that preaching of the Word of God is no longer sufficient for both young and old. If this is true, then we should open bars in order to reach the multitudes of drinkers. We should open porno-shops in order to reach those who engage in smut. Shouldn’t we go to their level so we can bring them to the Lord Jesus Christ?”

  • Denouncing Rock’ n’ roll for invoking dark forces

The Satanic Roots of Rock Music – Jesus is Savior

The influence of dark forces on Rock music, as detailed by a religious individual.

  • What Rock ‘n’ roll represents, according to non dissenters

History of Rock & Roll – Shmoop

“The songs and the sounds we call “rock and roll” evolved from many different sources, in many different regions, and at many different moments in twentieth- century history. The music was shaped—and continues to be molded and transformed—by countless regular people, some doing what they love, others seeking refuge from what they hate, some hoping to change the world, and still others resisting what they fear.”

  • A look at the Civil Rights movement (that bring in mind the argument concerning Rock ‘n’ roll)

Find evidence of mistreatment of African-Americans, and highlight racist beliefs and where they stem from. Will be used to connect to prejudice against Rock ‘n’ roll.

A brief history of racism in the United States | SoundVision.com

  • A look at the eclectic topics of Rock ‘n’ roll music

Cheeseburger in Paradise by Jimmy Buffett Songfacts

Brief description as to why Jimmy Buffet decided to write a song about cheeseburgers.

Fortunate Son Meaning – Shmoop

Detailing how Creedence Clearwater wrote an anti-war/ anti- violence song about the Vietnam conflict.

  • Illustrate the argument that rock musicians have used dark forces sometime in their careers, including those that seemed like they would never be involved with the dark forces

“Too Drunk To Karaoke” Hit Song Mocks God – Jesus is Savior

Jimmy Buffet, along with Toby Keith, glorify being drunk, which is highly sinful.

  • Explaining “don’t judge a book by its cover” (optional)

Don’t Judge a Book By Its Cover – MIT

“We live in a very superficial society. It is very easy to fall into the trap of looking only at the surface of people, things, and ideas without taking the time and effort to delve deeper into them.”

“Only by looking at the less obvious features can we know what is truly the most outstanding person, object, or idea. And then we will know it with confidence.”

Working Hypotheses

Working Hypothesis 1

Rock’n’ roll does not gain its popularity from invoking dark forces, as some preachers tend to claim.

Working Hypothesis 2

The popular saying,”don’t judge a book by its cover,” can be illustrated by the common  misinterpretation of Rock ‘n’ roll.

Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/ Classification Argument

Explain how Rock ‘n’ roll is misunderstood, offering clear examples to show its variety. Also connect the argument to the civil rights movement, where the black citizens argued that they should not be unfairly judged due to their outward appearance (instead of how they are as people).

Cause/Effect Argument

Analyze the reasons why preachers and general rock dissenters have condemned the popular type of music. What caused them to preach against Rock ‘n’ roll?

Rebuttal Argument

Attack the argument that rock is centered on an eclectic amount of topics, by highlighting the fact that many of the rock artists who may have written music about various things have had history invoking dark forces, in one way or another.

Current State of Research

So far, I believe that I have laid a loose groundwork of where my paper could go. My personal opinions have not yet changed concerning the argument, but my focus for the hypothesis is not as narrow-minded. I can now better understand where the counterargument is stemming from, and how much variety can be included under Rock’n’ roll, why still being able to relate to other misunderstood topics in history. I hope that the eventual outcome is that I am able to produce a mostly coherent and interesting paper, that will bridge together multiple little topics under one big hypothesis. I want both sides of the argument to be understood and relatable to the reader (even though the paper is supporting mainly one side). I still can “dump” a whole lot more outside information that may help my paper as well.

A07 White Paper – aaspiringwriter

India: The Next Superpower?

Content Descriptions

  • Usual image of India in people’s mind
  • What India is actually like
  • Reasons why it can be a superpower
  • Reasons why it cannot be a superpower
  • How India is fighting against its problems
  • India’s Biggest competition
  • Despite India has a potential to be the superpower

1. Working Hypothesis

Poverty and corruption is still strong in India. But with its rapidly changing Global Economy, Development in Information Technology and Infrastructure, The Republic of India is considered as one of the possible emerging superpowers of the world.

2. Working Hypothesis

Statistics show that, The Indian economy has the potential to become the world’s 3rd-largest economy by the next decade, and one of the two largest economies by mid-century.

Arguments

Classification:-  After its independence from the British East India company in 1947, India was a shattered economy with widespread illiteracy and shocking poverty. The growing population didn’t make it easy either. Despite of that India has somehow managed to overcome its issues and is currently one of the leading economies in the world. India is the biggest successful democracy in the world. It has made tremendous growth in the sectors such as: Information Technology, Agriculture, Infrastructure, Education, healthcare etc. India has topped the World Bank’s growth outlook for 2015-16 for the first time with the economy having grown 7.6% in 2015-16 and expected to grow 8.0%+ in 2016-17. But it is still seen as a 3rd world country and people are not very optimistic about it being the super-power.

Cause/Effect:-  Factors such as pollution, population explosion, poverty, corruption and illiteracy are taking away the fact that India has made enormous growth despite of all the challenges. These factors are hindering India in becoming the next super-power and is stealing the focus from its potential, hard work and progress.

Current State Of Research Paper:

I believe my research paper is pretty concrete at the moment. The data I have collected shows how much India has progressed after Independence and how people are expecting too much from it too soon. India has a tremendous potential to be the super power but the journey isn’t easy. The final product of my research paper will show how people stereotype India and how different it really is and what are the steps India is taking to eradicate its problems in-order to become the superpower. I hope my paper will help me break India’s stereotype and educate people about its progress.

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Dialectical Behavior Therapy

Dialectical Behavior Therapy (DBT) was created specifically for the treatment of chronically suicidal patients. Therefore, it can help the college students that experience suicidal ideations. Validation is an important part of DBT, so that the patients do not feel like their feelings aren’t being taken seriously. This kind of emotional validation is something everyone needs, as we all need to know that what we feel is okay.

DBT is also effective in the treatment of people with Borderline Personality Disorder (BPD), something that many college students show symptoms of; symptoms include dangerous/risky behavior such as drinking to excess or relationship violence. In general, DBT covers five types of dysregulation; these are emotion, self, behavior, relationship, and cognitive dysregulation. The article goes on to describe how these problems affect people with BPD, but I intend to prove that they also affect most students on a college campus.

DBT has four main goals. These are to get the patient to control behavior, experience emotions, experience ordinary happiness and unhappiness (as opposed to these emotions to a degree that causes problems), and to form a sense of freedom and joy. These are accomplished primarily through group and individual therapy and phone coaching that help the patient develop skills, work through obstacles to skill use, help translate skills to daily life, and to help the therapist stay motivated and skilled. Obviously, the average college student doesn’t need this extensive of treatment, but one-on-one work with a therapist such as that which I have done could benefit them greatly.

 

Courtship Violence Among College Students: A Comparison of Verbally and Physically Abusive Couples

            The researchers distributed 2000 surveys about relationship violence and students’ pasts with drinking and abuse, and used 572 to gather their data. This found that 82% of college students admitted to using verbal violence against a partner, and 21% admitted to the use of physical violence. Emotional/verbal violence is so often overlooked, especially among young people, but this statistic shows that it should not be so. These types of emotional and relationship dysregulation that cannot be ignored.

The violence, whether verbal or physical, often came from a place of darkness in the student’s far or recent past. Many of the abusers had experienced abuse at home as children, and many had admitted to drinking prior to violence. Regardless of reason, this dysregulation cannot be excused or ignored, but it can be prevented. Students who had learned to deal with their emotions in a healthy way, and knew how to maintain a healthy relationship, would not have committed relationship violence. DBT teaches people how to assertively, but not abusively, communicate thoughts and feelings. This could have prevented many cases of abuse on campus.

Correlates of College Student Binge Drinking

            This study was conducted in 1993 nationwide and included over 17000 students. The researchers define binge drinking as five or more drinks at once for men and four or more for women. The results were that 44% of college students were binge drinkers, with factors such as race and belonging to a fraternity or sorority playing a role.

While this is not a majority, it is still a number to be concerned about. This type of impulsive behavior is a textbook example of behavior dysregulation, often implemented to “treat” emotional dysregulation. Again, if the students knew how to properly handle emotions (i.e. if they were taught DBT skills) this could be avoided all together.

Dialectical Behavioral Therapy (2nd article with this title)

            DBT has four main principles, carried out by four main modules of treatment. It prioritizes the patient-therapist relationship, a nonjudgmental approach to treatment, teaching effective behaviors (and how they differ from the ineffective) and teaching dialectical thinking. These are carried out by teaching mindfulness, distress tolerance, emotion regulation, and interpersonal effectiveness. DBT is designed to treat people with various mood disorders. However, DBT can help many everyday problems such as stress and mood-dependent choices, and can reduce the risk of self-harming behaviors.

Depression, Desperation, and Suicidal Ideation in College Students: Results from the American Foundation for Suicide Prevention College Screening Project at Emory University

            This national study found that 11.1% of college students experiences suicidal ideation in the past four weeks. It also found that 16.5% of students had a past suicide attempt in their lifetime. While these numbers are not overwhelmingly high, they are too high not to do anything. It was found that 85% of the students who admitted to suicidal ideation were not receiving treatment. The solution? Treat them, it’s simple. These are prime examples of students who need DBT desperately, especially considering it is aimed at those with self-destructive tendencies.

Treatment Failure in Dialectical Behavior Therapy

            This article is essentially the complaints of a novice therapist unable to properly administer DBT, and I have so many problems with it. But those can be found in my “Rebuttal Argument” section, along with many specifics about this case. Basically, this researcher, who is a therapist, had a patient for a few months (which is not enough time to make that much significant progress) who was resistant to DBT treatment. She chronically overstepped the therapist-patient boundary and caused the therapist a lot of distress. So instead of reaching out and helping her patient, the therapist withdrew the treatment she so shoddily tried to give. She failed to validate her patient’s emotions on multiple occasions and did not take into account that a rigid DBT schedule may not be right for the patient. She needs more experience. This source shows how DBT must be administered correctly and that not all therapists are reliable.

Don’t Let Your Emotions Run Your Life for Teens

This is a workbook for teenagers that teaches Dialectical Behavior Therapy in a simple and accessible way. It includes definitions of the different aspects of DBT, such as mindfulness, assertive speaking, and the difference between the wise, reasoning, and emotional minds. Each chapter has stories of different people’s problems and how DBT could help them solve said problems. The chapters also have exercises for the reader to complete in order to start applying DBT to their own life. It does not focus on any specific disorder, but focuses on the every day emotions that everyone feels and how to deal with them, making it a great book for college students that have not been diagnosed.

1.   Working Hypothesis 1

DBT could benefit the majority of college students, not just those with diagnosed mental illnesses.

1a. Working Hypothesis 2

DBT can be very helpful, but only when the person administering it is extensively trained and knows how to properly execute treatment.

2. Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/Classification Argument

How DBT is seen as too much for BPD patients, but it isn’t!

Initial Argument

It seems like multiple therapy sessions a week and phone calls in between is a lot, especially for someone who struggles with their everyday life in the first place. So how do we get people characterized as being hard to motivate and unpredictable to conform to this model? We don’t. DBT doesn’t have to be this rigid, overwhelming program that takes up someone’s entire life. Even in the most extreme cases that seem to require this, it could actually do more harm than good.

BPD patients already often suffer from social isolation, so taking time out of their life that they could be part of society for therapy sessions could be detrimental. The constant doctors’ appointments turn a person into a stigma of the person who is always at therapy. While other’s judgement should not be considered, it often is, especially in BPD patients who so often rely on outside validation. So, when a person only has a few close peers and they never get to see her because she is always doing DBT work, it further isolates her and stigmatizes her, creating a vicious cycle of problems to therapy to more problems.

I learned DBT from weekly 45-minute therapy sessions and one workbook. Now, I haven’t even received a BPD diagnosis (let’s say I’m on the borderline of being borderline) but the therapy was prescribed for my anxiety and depression, and it worked. The small amounts of information I was receiving and putting into practice were just enough to be useful, but not overwhelming. It helped me become, essentially, a whole, functioning person.

What I’m trying to say from this anecdote is that small doses (for lack of a better term) of DBT can be effective, especially when treating immediate crises. A therapist could bring up, say, one skill per session that pertains to what a patient has described as their most recent problem. Classifying a problem into a category of dysregulation should be easy for anyone trained, and finding a skill to match is simple from there. That way, the patient is literally learning DBT as it applies to their life, making them feel validated and like there is something that can help them immediately. This gives them opportunity to use the skills right then and there, making them more effective and more likely to be remembered. Overall, this more relaxed approach to DBT would most likely solve people’s misconceptions about the practice.

A08 Argument

In its purest form, Dialectical Behavior Therapy (DBT) is very regimented and time-consuming. Clive J. Robbins and Zachary Rosenthal describe the therapy, originally developed by Marsha Linehan, as requiring multiple group and individual therapy sessions weekly, skills training, phone coaching, and meetings among a person’s team of therapists. I do not subscribe to this definition, described in the DBT section of Acceptance and Mindfulness in Cognitive Behavior Therapy. DBT is, essentially, whatever dialectical behavior skills a person needs in order to improve their life.

The workbook Don’t Let Your Emotions Run Your Life for Teens breaks down DBT perfectly to fit most people’s lifestyle. It teaches individual skills and outlines which situations call for which skills, giving exercises on how a person is going to apply said skills. It builds upon itself, starting with the basics that apply to everyday life and getting more specific as it goes. That is how DBT should be, and that is how I learned to apply it to my own life.

For a person with BPD, life is hard enough already. The disorder is almost entirely made up of life-interfering behaviors such as impulsive actions, dysregulated relationships and emotions, and some symptoms of depression such as lack of motivation. We cannot expect such individuals to keep up a schedule like Robbins and Rosenthal require.

For someone without BPD, say, a college student who still shows many signs of dysregulation, life is incredibly busy. No college student has time for class, homework, and a social life in general let alone when paired with multiple therapy sessions a week with phone coaching in between. Along with the lack of time, society still stigmatizes going to therapy as a sign of weakness, which may deter many college students from such a regimented form of DBT. Students will still need to go to therapy, but at a more relaxed pace, giving them more time for it and welcoming less judgement.

A less intense form of DBT is an effective compromise for all recipients of the therapy. Going to therapy once a week and working from a book like Don’t Let Your Emotions Run Your Life for Teens was enough to make a difference in my life, and could do the same for many others. For BPD patients, it requires less effort and is not as overwhelming. For college students, it takes up less time and welcomes less stigma. DBT can be redefined, and this new definition will help many people.

Cause/Effect Argument

College life causes dysregulation by nature, but said dysregulation is seen as part of the college experience

Initial Argument

It is common knowledge that at college, people experience change. This change can cause dysregulation in students, but often that dysregulation is overlooked. In general, there are a good amount of college students who party and are in relationships. I’m not going to say that these are inherently unhealthy or cause dysregulation, but it is interesting to see the related statistics.

82% of college students have admitted to using verbal violence against a romantic partner, often brought on by the use of drugs or alcohol. In that vein, 44% of college students have been classified as binge drinkers. This means that, in those relationships and parties seen as part of the college experience, relationship, emotional, and behavior dysregulation exist.

I think that the immense change that college students are undergoing, and the immense pressure felt by many of them causes this dysregulation. If a person is under almost constant stress and/or feels lost in life, and they are not receiving any type of help, dysregulation is bound to happen. This brings me to my original point; college students need DBT. Once we stop looking at dysregulation as a part of being at college and see it as a real problem that has a clear solution, we are on the path to fixing it.

A09 Argument

It is common knowledge that at college, people experience change. According to Brian Harke of the Huffington post, students come to college “overly optimistic and confident in their ability to manage the challenges they will encounter at college.” This can cause an amount of stress that student have never dealt with before, and therefore do not know how to manage in a healthy way. Many students may look to partying or other relationships to cope with their stress. These relationships and parties are not inherently problematic, but when they are forced or done with the wrong people, they can create dysregulation.

First off, of course, there is the academic side of college, which is the main cause of stress. Students think that they can handle college academics, and often get a reality check in the form of a failed test or paper. There are entire textbooks dedicated to teaching students how to deal with college-level academics, such as “College Success” created by the Extended Learning Institute and Lumens Learning. This book describes college as being inherently stressful, and attempts to guide students in the right direction towards success. It is interesting that even an academic source sees the immense pressure felt by students in all aspects of life. But stress is not limited only to academics in college.

Many students know only what other people have told them in terms of college. For many students, information and stories come from their parents, who have most likely been out of college for many years and are focusing only on the good. They talk about the “College Experience” as if there is a standard for activities in college, like partying or falling in love. This puts pressure on students to not only achieve academically in the ways they have been encouraged to, but also to achieve socially. The wild and sometimes-exaggerated stories set even more expectations for students to fulfill, so forced relationships and parties with acquaintances occur. These non-organic interactions can cause dysregulation simply by nature, they did not happen naturally, they are forced, and they are unhealthy. This is not to say that to say that all relationships and parties are inherently unhealthy or cause dysregulation, but it is interesting to see the related statistics.

82% of college students have admitted to using verbal violence against a romantic partner, often brought on by the use of drugs or alcohol. In that vein, 44% of college students have been classified as binge drinkers. This means that, in those relationships and parties seen as part of the college experience, a good amount of relationship, emotional, and behavior dysregulation exist.

The immense change that college students are undergoing, and the pressure felt by many of them causes the dysregulation described by the earlier statistics. Not only academic pressure, but that to somehow “succeed” socially, if that is even possible. If a student is under almost constant stress and/or feels pressure to succeed and they are not receiving any type of help, dysregulation is bound to happen. This brings me to my original point; college students need DBT. Once we stop looking at dysregulation as a part of being at college and see it as a real problem that has a clear solution, we are on the path to fixing it.

Rebuttal Argument

Initial Argument

Therapists themselves have had many failures in implementing DBT, stating that in some extreme cases of BPD and emotional dysregulation, it doesn’t work. In one case, Shireen L. Rizvi had a patient named Barbara who was not affected, and whose disorder may have been worsened, by DBT. Barbara had BPD, social anxiety, severe depression, PTSD, and was an abuse survivor.

Over the course of six months, Rizvi struggled to treat Barbara, often blaming her “therapy-interfering behaviors” such as not making eye contact, asking her very personal questions, and calling her in crisis almost daily. The response to these behaviors is what makes the argument that DBT didn’t work here completely invalid. Rizvi admitted to outright ignoring some of these behaviors, when the very basics of DBT state that a patient must feel validated in order to receive treatment. Instead of indulging and therefore validating these behaviors, maybe partially answering a question or asking her why she didn’t make eye contact, Rizvi let them agitate her and obstruct her own practice.

While Barbara did overstep the patient-therapist line (she had had a romantic affair with a previous therapist, so she didn’t understand it in the first place) the response should have been one of understanding and willingness to help, not one of agitation and rejection. Rizvi admitted to being a “novice therapist”, but as someone who is not even a therapist yet, I can see that that is no excuse. She saw someone who clearly had a mistrust of authority and no concept of patient boundaries, and did not take that into account. The bottom line is, she didn’t try hard enough to understand Barbara as a person rather than as a set of symptoms. It is these therapists who most often fail with DBT. It is not the therapy’s fault; it is the fault of the therapist administering it.

A10 Argument

Therapists themselves have had many failures in implementing DBT, stating that in some extreme cases of BPD and emotional dysregulation, it doesn’t work. In one case, Shireen L. Rizvi had a patient named Barbara who was not affected, and whose disorder may have been worsened, by DBT. Barbara had BPD, social anxiety, severe depression, PTSD, and was an abuse survivor.

Over the course of six months, Rizvi struggled to treat Barbara, often blaming her “therapy-interfering behaviors” such as not making eye contact, asking her very personal questions, and calling her in crisis almost daily. The response to these behaviors is what makes the argument that DBT didn’t work here completely invalid. Rizvi admitted to outright ignoring some of these behaviors, when the very basics of DBT state that a patient must feel validated in order to receive treatment. Instead of indulging and therefore validating these behaviors, maybe partially answering a question or asking her why she didn’t make eye contact, Rizvi let them agitate her and obstruct her own practice.

While Barbara did overstep the patient-therapist line (she had had a romantic affair with a previous therapist, so she didn’t understand it in the first place) the response should have been one of understanding and willingness to help, not one of agitation and rejection. Rizvi admitted to being a “novice therapist”, but as someone who is not even a therapist yet, I can see that that is no excuse. She saw someone who clearly had a mistrust of authority and no concept of patient boundaries, and did not take that into account. The bottom line is, she didn’t try hard enough to understand Barbara as a person rather than as a set of symptoms. It is these therapists who most often fail with DBT. It is not the therapy’s fault; it is the fault of the therapist administering it.

Therapists themselves need to take into account the state of their patients and how to best treat them. They cannot look at every patient as the same textbook set of symptoms, they have to see the patient as a whole person. Though a person may fit the criteria for rigorous DBT, the person may not be able to handle it. This is another issue with the Rizvi case. Barbara most likely would have done better under a less structured form of DBT, as one who has had little structure in her life to begin with. She is not familiar with such intense dedication to one thing, a thing which she is not even convinced is worthwhile yet. So, giving her small tidbits of DBT in her therapy sessions would have not only given the therapy more meaning to her, but may have made her more receptive to it.

But obviously not all college students are Barbara and not all therapists are Rizvi. However, they may still have therapy interfering behaviors and not be the most eager to start DBT. That is why a very relaxed form of it is best. If someone doesn’t want to do something, it makes no sense to completely immerse them in it against their will. Introducing DBT slowly in small pieces makes much more sense. The therapist doesn’t even have to officially declare “We’re going to do DBT now.” They can simply give skills that pull from DBT and mention the name, intriguing the patient. If they see that these skills are helping them, and they know they come from DBT, they will be more eager to dive deeper into the practice.

But of course, the person has to be willing to use the skills in order for them to help. If someone completely ignores their skills and makes no progress, then what? That’s where the emotional validation comes in. As Robins and Rosenthal say, that is one of the core principles of successful DBT. Patients have to believe that the skills will help them, and that they can implement them successfully. The safer and more empowered a patient feels, the more likely they are to use therapy skills outside of the office.
The bottom line is, it all comes down to the proficiency of the therapist. If they look at patients as textbook sets of symptoms who all need the same thing, no progress is going to be made. However, if they change their style to meet each patient’s needs, looking at them as a human being, it makes all the difference. This kind of care could benefit everyone, from the most resistant BPD patient to the scared college student. Therapists just have to be willing to try.

3.   Current State of Research Paper

I’m getting there. I need more sources, which I will gather. A lot of my arguments are based on personal experience, which I guess I’m proud to say I have a lot of. I’d also like to get more patient’s opinions rather than therapists describing patients’ experiences. I think the patient perspective is very important, I mean, they’re the ones we’re treating after all. But I feel like some of this, with revision, is going to go directly into my paper. The information I’ve found so far has been fascinating, and I’m both excited and terrified to fall further down the DBT rabbit hole. Wish me luck, maybe send me a rope or something so I can get out eventually.

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  • Game Developers
  • Game Publishers
  • Retailers
  • Parents
  • Columbine Fallout
  • Games as a Scapegoat
  • The Link Between Games and Violence
  • Violent Video Game Inspired Crimes
  • Other Art Forms

Working Hypothesis 1

Violent video games are not a catalyst of violent behavior, but a scapegoat for it.

Working Hypothesis 2

Parents should be held responsible for violent video game inspired crimes, because they are the ones purchasing these games for their children without care.

Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/Classification Argument

Other forms of art such as film and music are often criticized for inciting violent behavior in people just like video games. However, if all forms of art are seen as potential causes of violence, then it would seem that anything with some amount of violence when witnessed causes violent behavior. However, many would not attribute violence to the news, or history books.

Cause/Effect Argument

Due to a significant amount of criminals or even victims blaming crimes on violent video games, it has become a belief that violent video games can inspire crime out of people or at the very least, desensitize you to crime. However, research from the American Psychological Association states that while there is a link between decreases in empathy and increases in aggressive behavior, there is no indication that it makes people antisocial or prone to violent behavior.

Rebuttal Argument

While criminals may blame a crime for being inspired by violent video games, it does not necessarily mean that is the case. If someone establishes that they were inspired by a video game, it might lift some of the responsibility of the crime off of them, and as such, makes blaming video games very tempting despite not being true.

Current State of the Research Paper

As of now, I believe I have a decent understanding of the topic and my thesis on it. However, I do not have enough concrete data from research as of yet. I cannot find it, but I want to know more about the study that the American Psychological Association conducted and what kind of numerical data they found. Also, while I may have some interesting viewpoints, I do not think I have figured out my topic well enough to be very persuasive on it, so I am going to read more and figure things out better.