A huge problem in Vancouver right now involving heroin addicts committing crimes to support their bad habits [no verb in this sentence]. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop addicts from committing crimes. The crime rate has gone up due to these addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Their daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because they are using. Due to the addiction, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are crimes such as breaking and entering. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with the program is that it won’t help addicts ween off the drugs. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. Also it will keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.
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Some improvements but still far too many weaknesses and errors, Jsoccer. Grade neutral.