Robust Verbs – thebeard

The huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts is that crimes are being committed to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem in Vancouver is the large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Addicts have trouble maintaining daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships. Heroin users will do whatever they need to do to get drugs in their hands. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. Heroin users have no limits to retrieve drugs to feed their addiction. The program is meant to save the city from rising crime rates, but not to ween our the addicts off using heroin. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Robust Verbs-LifeisSublime

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

 

Revised

Vancouver has a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The crime rate has increased due to theses addictions, which is a problem for the people of Vancouver. Addicts have a hard time getting through the day. Dailey activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are harder to maintain as an addict of heroin. Addictions cause people to act out in order to obtain the drug they crave. In order to get the drugs, addicts have resorted to breaking and entering and stealing to fund their addiction. The limits are endless as to what addicts would do to get their hands on their drug of choice. The issues facing this program involved not actually helping people ween off of a harmful drug, instead it controls the rate of crimes being committed by people suffering with addiction. The program insures taking these people off the streets, avoiding minor street crimes, and out of the hospital. Hospitals don’t have time to deal with people who’s only intention is to use a bad drug, especially when the hospital bills aren’t getting paid. “Free heroin for addicts” gives people free heroin in the cleanest and safest way possible. The program will fix the city and clean up the street crime, but will not help the people suffering from addiction.

Enough About You-LifeisSublime

“Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then you would have to hide all of your money under your mattress or around your house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; you either have some or you don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. You don’t actually see your money being transferred. When you get paid, you aren’t handed cash, you don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and you just have to trust that you got more money.”

 

Revised

Money seems to have a big role in our society, not much can be done without it. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it’s not seen physically. In today’s society, it’s expected to have faith in the government and in the banking system to handle everyone’s money in a proper manner; if the faith isn’t there we would have to resort to hiding money in mattresses and in the home. I don’t know what the bank does with the money, or how it’s handled. I always had a simple image on money, it’s either there to use or it’s not–that’s it. However being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US Gold, French Francs, Brazilian Cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. The money isn’t actually seen being transferred. When a paycheck is administered the individual doesn’t receive cash, not even a physical check anymore. The money is transferred right to the bank account; the process just has to be trusted.

Robust Verbs-Flyerfan1974

A huge problem has surfaced in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem with the program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. The program is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates. The program provides the drug, keeping addicts off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. Hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. The program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The crime problem in the city will be solved, but not the addiction that these people face.

Enough About You- phillygirl

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of our money under our mattress or around our house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of our money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. We don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, we don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to our bank account, and we just have to trust that we got more money.

E10: Enough About You- Theadmiral

Money seems to have a big role in our society;  Can’t do much or get far if our bank accounts are empty. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it’s not seen physically. In today’s society, we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then money would have to be hidden in mattresses, and all around the house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; it’s either there or nonexistent.—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. Money isn’t actually being transferred. When we are paid, there is no transfer of cash, or a physical check anymore, just a trust that more money will show up in our accounts.

“Enough About You “

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of your money under your mattress or around your house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of my money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, I don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to my bank account, and I just have to trust that you got more money.

 

Enough About You Jonhjelly

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we all must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then we would have to hide all of our money under our mattress or around our house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of our money. I always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. we don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, you don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to our bank account, and we just have to trust that we got more money.

E10: Enough About You UnknownTrendsetter

Money seems to have a big role in our society; it can’t do much or get far if one doesn’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it isn’t seen physically. In today’s society, must having faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner is vital; if not, then the only options left are to hide all money under a mattress or around one’s house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; it was either owned, or it wasn’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian Cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. Money is not always actually see your money being transferred. During payment, cash is not actually handed out to the person, most of the time people don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to a bank account, and us working-class citizens just have to trust that you got more money.

E10: But Enough About You – Killroy513

Money seems to have a big role in our society; One can not do much or get far if  one does not have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when one does not see it physically. In today’s society one must have faith in the government and in the banking system that one’s money is being handled in the proper manner. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar.