Money, without which nothing gets done, drives our society. Money is valuable in different ways, even when not physically present. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then money would have to be hidden under the mattress, or around the house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of our money. Money is seemingly simple; it is either there or it is not. However, this assignment has shown me that US gold, Brazilian cruzeros, digital currency, and online banking share something in common. Money is never seen being transferred. An employee’s payment does not involve physical cash, but rather a check that when received by the bank will have money added to an online bank account. All of the aforementioned currencies require our trust to work.

Money plays a big role in our society- without it we can’t go anywhere or buy anything. Even when  not physically handled, money is being used in various manners. In today’s society, we must trust that the government and the banking system will properly handle our money, freeing us from the burden of having to find a place to hide said money. Unfortunately, I do not actually know what goes on in the banks, including how our money is being handled. Up until a few weeks ago, I thought money was  a simple concept; we either possess some, or we don’t. After having been introduced to this assignment, however, all of the world’s different currency systems now seem similar. In all cases, money is never physically transferred. When we get paid, the money is directly deposited into our bank account, never actually appearing before our eyes. And at that point, all that we can do is hope that we have received money.

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Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then you would have to hide all of your money under your mattress or around your house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; you either have some or you don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When you get paid, you aren’t handed cash, you don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and you just have to trust that you got more money.

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Having money will decide how far we can get in our society.Money affects our lives even if we don’t notice it. We keep our money where we think its safe, whether thats a bank or under our mattress. The big mystery lie with the way banks ways handle of handling and taking care of the money we give them. Money’s complexity stretches beyond the notion that either we are wealthy or poor. After this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeiros, and debit accounts now seem similar. Sometimes we don’t acutely see our money being transferred. When we get paid, our money gets directly deposited in bank accounts without us ever seeing it.

Money, without which nothing gets done, drives our society. Money has physical and nonphysical value. The government, including the banks, must be trusted to handle money with proper manner. If failed to do so, money would have to be put under mattresses. Little knowledge is known about how banks handle people’s money. Money should be known either as having money or not. The Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. The money being transferred is unseen. Employees now receive direct deposit into their bank account, and must trust the system without physically seeing the money.

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it can’t be seen physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then we would have to hide all of our money under our mattress or around our houses. What happens in banks is unaware of, or how they take care of our money. We always thought money was simple; we either have some or we don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar.  Money can’t be seen being transferred.  When we get paid, money is transferred to bank accounts instead of cash or physical checks.

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far in we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it isn’t seen physically. In today’s society faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled in the proper manner keeps us from having to hide all of our money under our mattresses or around the house. What the happens in the bank, or how they take care of our money, is unknown to many. Money used to be simple; a person either has money or doesn’t have money – that’s it. However, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeiros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When getting paid, we aren’t handed cash or a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to our bank accounts, and we just have to trust that we got more money.

Money seems to have a big role in our society; it is difficult to do much or get far if none exists. Money is valuable in different ways, even if it is not seen physically. In today’s society having faith in the government and in the banking system where these funds are being handled with in the proper manner, if not then there would be a lot of money under mattresses all over the country.  What happens in the banks is unknown, as well as how they take care of the money. Money is thought to be simple; either it’s there or it’s not—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees money being transferred. When a company pays its employees, it does not hand out cash, it doesn’t send a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to a bank account, and the employees trust that they will receive more money.

Money seems to have a big role in our society; no-one  can do much or get far if they don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it is not seen physically. In today’s society there must be faith in the government and in the banking system that our money is being handled within, if not then we would have to hide all of our money under our mattresses or around our homes. What happens in the banks and how they take care of our money is not well understood by the masses. However, some believe that money is simple; its there or its not—that’s it. Being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When we get paid, we aren’t handed cash, we don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to our bank account, and we just have to trust that we got more money.