Visual Rewrite-Collegekid9

0:00 – Ad starts with a shot of the lower half of a man on a rocking horse in the park on a sunny day.  It makes us wonder why there is a grown man at a park. This can also make people uncomfortable.

0:00-0:04 – The camera moves up to show the man bouncing and rocking back and fourth with a huge smile on his face. The man, who appears to be of hispanic decent, is wearing a navy blue sweat jacket, a grey t-shirt, kaki shorts, white socks, and black sneakers. It seems as if his smile is saying “Aren’t we having fun?”  It also seems if its hhis day off due to his casual clothes

0:04-0:05 – The camera moves to a white woman who is sitting on the park bench with a baby stroller. She looks at him and smirks but then diverts her attention back to the stroller.

0:05-0:08 – The scene changes to a white man, in a green jacket, makes a weird face and presses it against the glass of hot dog both while looking to the right as if looking towards some one. When it hits 0:08 seconds, the man removes his face from the glass and has a blank expression as if trying to see what the booth owners reaction was.

0:08-0:10 – An African American man, who owns the hot dog booth, looks up at the white man with a puzzled face as if wondering what had just occurred.

0:10-0:12 – Camera is angled upwards where you see the tops of the trees and the sky. An African American man, in a white short sleeved button-down, tan trousers, and a blue with whit polka-dotted tie, is bouncing up and down while smiling and waving to something/someone.  It seems as if he has just come home from work.  At this point in the video we conclude that the three male adults are acting childish as if showing that no matter what age you are you can always have fun.

0:12-0:15 – The shot shows the back of a neighbors head as they are looking over the fence at the man. He continues to jump in circles while smiling and then he does a ballet spin with his hands above his head.

0:15-0:21 – The camera goes to a little white girl, wearing a pink jacket and glasses, laughing at the man making faces pressed up to the glass. The white man then sticks his tongue out, puts his hands up to his head (as if making moose antlers), and wiggles side to side. The little girl (assumably his daughter) then proceeded to put her thumb up to her nose and wiggle her fingers at him. The African American man then looks at them both and smiles at them. The white man stares back at him and then continues to make another weird face at the little girl.

0:21-0:24- The camera shows the African American man jumping on a trampoline with his son. The little boy is wearing a brown, white, and green stripped short sleeved shirt with jeans. The pair are both smiling and jumping over one another.

0:24-0:27- The shot shows a little Hispanic boy smiling and bouncing on a rocking horse. The camera then pans over to the father doing the exact same thing int the rocking horse in front of him.

0:27-0:31- The camera shows the neighbor looking over the fence at the African American man bouncing on the trampoline.

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