Causal Argument-Philly321

Calming the Storm

Officer Darren Wilson was proud to pin the badge of the Ferguson Police Department to his dress blues, but since he discharged his Sig P229 pistol on August 9, 2014, the badge reminds him that he mortally wounded a teenager in the line of duty. A nationwide study conducted from 2008-2012 by Pamela Kulbarsh, a psychiatric nurse for over 25 years and a member of San Diego’s Psychiatric Emergency Response Team, found that nearly 150,000 officers have experienced symptoms of Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, not to mention the officers who, because of the stigma of appearing weak, have yet to come forward with their symptoms. For years, we have ignored the calls for help from the guardians of our safety who have pledged to protect our nation.

It has been argued that officers are in no way affected by cultural influences in their field of duty. If an officer is in distress, he or she will seek out help. On the contrary, John Seifert, a Boulder County Sherriff’s Deputy, who earned a medal of valor for his actions in a 2008, a gun battle that saw dozens of rounds fired, struggled for years with post-traumatic stress disorder. He left the police force two years later and began heavily drinking. In 2015, Seifert was found at his home outside Nederland with a single shotgun blast to his neck. Why did Seifert choose not to seek help? Mike Violette, an executive director of the Colorado State Lodge Fraternal Order of Police, emphasized that it was “difficult enough to have officer’s come forward who have this problem. There is an ‘I can handle it’ attitude that cops have.” Seifert is one of hundreds of officers nationally who have taken their lives in the past 4 years, many of them suffering from PTSD. It is a condition long ignored by law enforcement, where confessing emotional trauma is looked down upon.

Perhaps the largest barrier to finding effective treatments and support systems is the culture that exists within law enforcement. The profession requires officers to restrain from their emotions and rein their feelings of pain or suffrage. It is presumed by law enforcement that officers can make that emotional switch and focus on another case, regardless of what they may be experiencing. In a predominantly male culture emphasizing toughness and a shrug-it-off, suck-it-up mentality, officers are forced to keep their feelings to themselves and resort to unhealthy methods of coping, which result in negative outcomes (such as alcohol abuse, risk-taking behaviors, etc.).

When a traumatic incident occurs, officers are left with the images, the smells, and the sounds. It lingers around them. A study conducted by psychologists from Harvard School of Public Health and the University of Rochester found that suppressing emotions can lead to negative emotions like anger, anxiety and depression. We know that stress can build up and become chronic when our “natural” fight-or-flight responses meant to help us survive in conflict situations are frustrated. Similarly, detrimental effects may occur when negative emotions remain unexpressed. When stress starts to interfere with an officer’s ability to live a normal life for an extended period, it can wear and tear on their bodies creating new problems or make existing problems worse. An officer, who does not come forward because of the stigma of appearing weak, will drive themselves crazy under the constant reminder of a horrific incident.

Law enforcement personnel receive training on the warning signs of alcohol use, abuse, and dependency. Informing police officer’s about the negative effects of alcohol abuse can only help them to a certain extent. But when police officer’s actually accumulate astronomical amounts of pressure in their field of duty, alcohol seems like a reasonable solution to their problems. Why not drink alcohol as a temporary relief to help cope with a murder case? Law enforcement is both a mentally and physically demanding job.  Alcohol provides an outlet for police officers because they refuse to seek treatment for their anxieties or symptoms of Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. The most remote cause for alcohol abuse in law enforcement lies in alcohol’s ability to alter levels of neurotransmitters in the brain that takes officer’s away from their line of duty and into a mindless bliss.

Police officers are more at risk alcohol abuse than the general public, as a result of their stress levels. Internal stressors, such as administrative stress, include lack of support, long hours, overtime, no room for advancement, and family complications.  External stressors are correlated with outside factors such as the attitude of the general public, daily exposure to trauma, negativity, and uneasiness when dealing with challenging and dangerous situations. Vicki Lindsay, a professor of Criminology and Penology at the University of Southern Mississippi, conducted a study of police officer’s in urban communities and found that of those officers surveyed, 11% of male officers and 16% of female officers reported alcohol use levels deemed “at-risk” by the National Institute on Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism. Problems that develop (such as alcohol dependency) are usually the result of officer’s, because of the stigma of appearing weak, reluctance to seek help.

We need to eliminate the stigma surrounding the culture of law enforcement regarding the harsh judgment of police officers who seek professional help for mental health concerns.  It is critical that officers learn healthy coping strategies to minimize stress on a regular basis, rather than attempt to mask stress with alcohol or other unhealthy behaviors. We cannot simply teach them about the negative effects of alcohol. We need to be there when it matters most.

Works Cited

New Source

Police and PTSDThe Law Enforcement Magazine. 22 Feb. 2013. Web. 4 Nov. 2016.

http://www.policemag.com/channel/careers-training/articles/2013/02/police-and-ptsd.aspx

New Source

Police Officers struggle with PTSDThe Denver Post. 18 Jun. 2014. Web. 4 Nov. 2016.

http://www.denverpost.com/2014/06/18/police-officers-struggle-with-ptsd-but-treatment-can-bring-stigma/

New Source

Keeping Your Emotions Bottled Up Could Kill YouHuffpost Living. 31 Mar. 2014. Web. 4 Nov. 2016.

http://www.huffingtonpost.ca/timi-gustafson/bottling-up-negative-emotions_b_5056433.html

New Source

Willman, Elizabeth A. “Alcohol Use Among Law Enforcement.” The Journal of Law Enforcement. 2.3 (2008) 1-4. Print.

Definition Argument-Prof2020

The separation of church and state is a concept that has been misinterpreted and blown out of proportion more times than it’s possible to keep track of. It defines the distance in the relationship between organized religion and the nation state. Thomas Jefferson wrote a letter to the Danbury Baptist Association in 1802 referencing the First Amendment to the United States Constitution. It includes this excerpt:

“Believing with you that religion is a matter which lies solely between Man & his God, that he owes account to none other for his faith or his worship, that the legitimate powers of government reach actions only, & not opinions, I contemplate with sovereign reverence that act of the whole American people which declared that their legislature should ‘make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof,’ thus building a wall of separation between Church and State.” [1]

He’s explaining that the Bill of Rights impedes the establishment of a national church which, in turn, prevents the government from interfering with a person’s right to expression of religion. After all, English protestants came to America seeking religious freedoms. That was a main pillar in the development of America as a colony of England.

Over time, the phrase has been so widely used and interpreted that it’s lost some of its salt. The separation of church and state is also tied to more broad religious freedoms such as being able to practice whatever religion you choose in the way you see fit. The United States was founded on biblical principles, most of which serve our country well and support the values of most American citizens, christian or not. However, we cannot claim to be a religiously inclusive nation while our laws only respect one religion.

In addition, having legal freedoms yet being oppressed by the general societal stance isn’t true freedom. For example, muslims are legally permitted to practice their religion in America as they see fit but after the Twin Tower attacks on 9/11, animosity towards Muslim Americans has skyrocketed. One in four Muslims either knows someone who has or have personally experienced an act of anti-muslim discrimination, harassment, verbal abuse or physical attack since 9/11. This discrimination and negative stance towards the entire culture isn’t just affecting those on the receiving end of it. European Americans are being misinformed about the reality of the situation. This extreme instance of widespread prejudice has blinded the rest of us to the truth about the groups involved, resulting in their oppression and our ignorance.

Because of the censorship in schools on what pertaining to religion can and can’t be taught, a lot of the details we learn about the 9/11 attacks comes from outside and often biased sources and so forms our own opinions on what actually happened. This is the reason we need to properly educate people on as many religions as possible. Religion is incredibly controversial and a lot of the friction could most likely be reduced if more people truly understood what they were arguing about. This education needs to start early, in our middle and elementary schools. Far too often, children grow up with convictions they adopted from their parents. Their beliefs aren’t even their own but if they heard it from their parents it has to be right..right? Sadly, that’s not always true. You have complete control over how you view the world but depending on the lens you’re using, what filters through will be vastly different. By properly educating our citizens about different religions and cultural practices, we’re giving them a better opportunity to make informed decisions about their how they interact with others.

While I truly believe in this concept, there are far too many rigid restrictions for this to flow smoothly. When the separation of church and state policy was adopted by the United States, it prevented one problems but started another. With the way the policy is currently being enforced, teaching students in public schools about religious practices becomes very difficult because the government can’t be seen throwing support behind a religious movement. This also prohibits the government from providing any funding or support to a private school, especially those with a religious affiliation. However, there is a loophole. Separation of church and state prevents government funded schools from teaching religion so in 2000, the public school district in Modesto, California began teaching about religion. The World Religions program is heavily regulated and monitored. Each class receives the same textbooks, study guides, visual aids, and lesson plan as every other class in the district. As long as the instructors aren’t giving more attention or support to one religion over others, the plan works and has worked brilliantly.

A group of researchers from the First Amendment Center has been following the program since its inception. The team admitted they were unsure of what their investigation would conclude. Students enrolled in the program were interviewed before, during and immediately after the course ended and then again six months later. They found that the student body involved became far more tolerant of other religions and cultural practices and even more likely to stand up for them and protect the religious rights of others. Students themselves said that the course had broadened their views and prepared them to fight back against faith based bullying. [2Perhaps the biggest concern of parents in the district is that it would weaken the faith of children who were raised with a religious background. Contrary to expectations, this increased tolerance resulted in no change in the faiths of students. Students who entered the program with religious convictions ended the course with the same convictions. [2]

With religion and religious beliefs being such a controversial topic, particularly in America, we need to take great strides as individuals and as a nation to mold our country and communities into those that cultivate and reflect the diversity growing within them. Diversity should not divide us. It should better prepare us to face controversy and handle it fairly and with an open mind.

Citations

  1. “Jefferson’s Letter to the Danbury BaptistsThe Final Letter, as Sent.” Jefferson’s Letter to the Danbury Baptists (June 1998). N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.
  2. Kilman, Carrie. “One Nation, Many Gods.” Teaching Tolerance. N.p., 2007. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.

Definition Argument- Princess272

A term that’s definition is debated throughout the world is a father. It takes a true man to be a true father, because the two go hand in hand. In order to define a father, a man must first be defined. A man is someone who is of good moral standing, does what he needs to do in order to succeed, is true to his word, and cares deeply for others. An example of a true man as oppose to a self proclaimed man is that any man can get a woman pregnant, but it takes a special one to step up and be a father. This idea of stepping up to the plate is the main difference between a self proclaimed man and a true man.

Google defines the word father as “a man in relation to his natural child or children”. This definition is more than lacking luster; it lacks the essence of what a father is. A father in today’s society is considered a provider, protector, teacher, friend, exemplar, patriarch, disciplinarian, and spiritual leader. These eight attributes of a father in today’s society sheds light on what father should be but not who can be a father. Any man who stand ahead of the curve for a child and leads them to bettering themselves is truly a father.

My father in particular is a great man. He took in my eldest brother as his own when he married my mother even though he was not his biological child. At the mere age of 3, my  brother did not know the significance of what my father had chose to do. My father chose to lead the path for this bastard child even though he did not have to. He decided to provide, protect, teach, be a friend, exemplify, be a patriarch, disciplinarian, and be a spiritual leader for this child even though my father had no offspring of his own. Due to men like my father who step up and be the father other men were not ready to be, the definition by google stating a father is “a man in relation to his natural child or children” is false. My father was more of a dad than my eldest brother’s biological father could ever be.

Father’s teach in many different ways. Some ways fathers teach are through example, as a patriarch, through disciplinary actions, and through spiritual leading. My father did and continues to do all of these things. First and foremost, my father is a pastor; spiritual leading came with the territory of being him. he constantly reminds his children of what God has planned for us and how we should stay focused on him. Because of actions such as this, his moral standing has always been exemplary and was always the example of what a man and a father should be. My father constantly used bible quotes over the years to back anything he does. One of his favorites to quote was Ephesians verse 6  chapter 4, which states, “And you, fathers, do not provoke your children to wrath, but bring them up in the training an admonition of the Lord”. With that said, he still had no problem chastising his children in order to help them understand right from wrong. In this aspect, the disciplinarian came out.

One action that always must be met in order to be considered a relatively good father is being “a man of your word”. A mans word is his bond. This aspect ties back to one of the most important attributes of being a father. Teaching what is right through example. If a father tells his children he will do something, it is a promise. A promise should never be broken or trust is lost. Without trust, a father cannot be a friend to their offspring. They can show kindness and compassion, but the level of interest cannot be faked. When keeping ones word is not seen as a priority, the bond is broken. The level of trust falls, and the relationship between the father and child suffers. If a man does not do everything in their power to keep their word to their children, they are not truly a father.

Although society has been changing and roles of mothers and fathers have been shifting, a father throughout time has always been the provider and protector of not only their children, but the family as a whole. In order to provide, fathers through the ages have gotten jobs that they may have not wanted to do, but they always made sure their family had the food on their table and a roof over their head. Fathers also have always been the protector of the family through different means. For some it’s a physical manifest of fighting an individual in order to protect his family; for others, it’s keeping their children out of the streets and getting an education.

According to google, a father is simply  “a man in relation to his natural child or children”. This false definition does not meet the standards of societies definition of a father, nor my own. A father does not need to be the biological father to his children, but rather a spiritual and moral leader that guides their children to a better life. This is done through teaching, being a trusting friend, protecting/ providing, leading by example, being man of good moral character, chastising children when needed, and being a spiritual leader. Without these qualities, no man can consider themselves a father let alone a great one.

Sources:

  1. https://www.facebook.com/FamilySharecom/. “9 Qualities of a Good Father.” FamilyShare – Discover How to Improve Your Family Life and More. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 Oct. 2016.
  2. Ephesians. King James. N.p.: n.p., n.d. Print.

White Paper – darnell18

White Paper

Content Descriptions

  • Statistics supporting a higher percentage of people being pulled over being minorities
  • What race the officers are that pull over these minorities
  • Discrimination defined and analyzed
  • The Philando Castile killing
  • Dallas revolt and killing of police officers
  1. Working Hypothesis 1

It is inexcusable to think that as far as we have come as a nation, that members of society are still heavily discriminated against.

1a. Working Hypothesis 2

We have come extremely far as a nation up to this point, but it is truly saddening knowing that discrimination is still a prominent factor in society today.
2. Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/Classification Argument

  • Discrimination defined covers a broad, vast variety of factors outside of simply race. It is important to fully understand the meaning because on a more narrow scale, young black males are more likely to get pulled over than adult black males due to certain stigmas.

Cause/Effect Argument

  • Continuing to discriminate toward African Americans in particular, and getting violent, leads to revolts or retaliations such as the one in Dallas recently. Those who felt disrespected or discriminated against stood their ground and shot and killed police officers. The fatalities on both sides prove this social issue’s significance.

Rebuttal Argument

  • In today’s day and age, more often than not it is just assumed that when a person of color is pulled over, stereotypes or discrimination/racism factored into the traffic stop. But it is essential to know that black officers pull over black people too. As well as that, white officers also pull over white people. Therefore, the opposite race is not always specifically out to get you because of how you look.

3. Current State of the Research Paper

At this point in my research, I am satisfied with the direction my paper is heading. It is a hot topic in our society today, so to shed some light on facts and statistics to educate any reader is my goal. I have a lot of content to work with and I am even educating myself in the process. More sources are still needed, but as of right now I am on track and where I want to be with this paper.

A07: White Paper

Hypothesis: If someone told you that there were a surgery that could make an athlete come back not only to their own strength before the injury but even stronger, what would you think?

Benefits we see from this surgery:

  1. Baseball injury, torn UCL ligament in a players elbow
  2. Causes players to have a ligament from other part in body removed and wrapped around to increase strength
  3. Long recovery but makes the players arm stronger then it was before the injury happened
  4. Should we start thinking about performing the surgery before an injury even occurs?
  5. This could amplify the game itself and make people change the ways they play

 

1.Working Hypothesis

In baseball, pitchers are forced to throw a ball at a inhuman direction which causes tremendous stress on the arm which could make the ligament holding just the lower arm bones to upper arm bones to tear leaving them sitting out for part of their careers which could be prevented with a single surgery.

2.Topics for smaller paper:

1)Definition/ Classification Argument:

  •  Sports injuries and how they can ruin players careers
  • how we can help prevent these injuries
  • different recovery times for different athletes injuries

2) Cause/Effect

  • The causes of all these injuries have many reasons that we can prevent but a certain injury in which is the scariest in baseball can we stopped early if we start to get this surgery done before the injury even happens.

3) Rebuttal Argument

  • People will think that if they believe there really is a surgery that not only brings an athlete back to their normal self but even stronger, why would we not have this done to every player before they start there main careers.

3.Current State of Research Paper

I believe that researching this topic is making me understand more about how we could really prevent this.  From looking up sources from the Elbow injury that happens at a rate to the surgery itself and recovery time is really giving me a good idea.  Being i am a baseball player myself is making this paper a lot more understandable for me and making it much more fun to write also.

 

 

Definition Argument- yankeeskid6

For the past couple of years all we have been accustomed to is watching Television and seeing a story about an unarmed black being killed by a cop. This has stirred itself into a movement, or a as I view it a civil war. Race tensions are almost as high as those from the 1960’s. The war between cops and black Americans has grown into a world epidemic. When we look at the definition of racial profiling it is said to be, “the discriminatory practice by law enforcement officials of targeting individuals for suspicion of crime based on the individual’s race, ethnicity, religion or national origin.” The definition proposes the argument that white officers arrest and/or kill African American citizens purely based off of the color of their skins and no actions. I find it hard to ever prove that a cop is racial profiling anyone. A law enforcement officer must have a reason for an arrest and must have a valid reason for firing their gun otherwise it would simply be murdering. This issue must be looked at not as a whole but as a singular person to person psychological issue. Racism is a noun, it describes either a person, place, or thing. So when a person describes an entire police department as racist it is just silly. Racism distinguishes one whole races from another whole race, grading the worth of each one to another. Therefore, when a police department holds staff with more than one race, by definition it is nearly impossible to title it as “racist”. When we move to the statistics and facts of police killings it is pretty clear that these two terms are no where present and easily misconstrued.

When we begin to look deeper into the arrests and killings involved with police officers some interesting statistics show up. First, lets look at where the common everyday African American citizen lives. According to pbs.org, since 1999 it has been recorded that close to 70 percent of black families or individuals live in the cities or inner-ring suburbs of America. Next, when we begin to look at crime rate in America we find out that most of the United States crime takes place in the Cities of the United States. According to the “New Observer” the worst murder rates take place in Detroit, New Orleans, Newark, St. Louis, and Baltimore; these all being majority black communities. Therefore, is it fair to say that cops are racially profiling these areas because of race, or are these people just looking at the facts and doing their job? The most interesting fact is that of the arrests themselves. Even though these communities are dominantly black statistics presented by the FBI say, “In 2013, 68.9 percent of all individuals arrested were “white,” 28.3 percent were black, and 2.9 percent were of other races. Furthermore, the FBI report claimed, “white” individuals were arrested more often for violent crimes than individuals of any other race and accounted for 58.4 percent of those arrests.” (newobserveronline.com) The article goes on to say that whites account for the most juveniles as well. So if more non-African Americans are being arrested each day in dominantly black communities how is discrimination, racism and racial profiling such immense topics of conversation? The answer is within itself, the media.

The media coverage of crimes involving African Americans has increased immensely over the past 2-3 years. Though it has been statistically shown that more whites are arrested throughout the year, the coverage of African American arrests and assault from police have overlapped the facts. The perception of the public is highly influenced by the media. If the media is always showing the wrong from officers or stories involving a white cop and a black criminal of course the public will grow a an image of racist police officers. Public perception is everything. This was imminent in the financial crisis of 2008. The public perception began to dwindle as more media coverage bashed the banks for losing money. People began to get scared and pulled out of their shares out of pure fear presented by negative coverage. Over 70 percent of crime coverage is based around African American arrests or killings. (Colleluori and Angster) The media deceives our perception and makes an issue out of nothing because it produces rating and controversy. Like the famous actor Morgan Freeman said in an interview on a news station, the reason there is still racism is because we keep talking about it. Think about that, if we simply stop talking about racism it will slowly go away. African Americans have the same rights as whites, they are recognized as everyday citizens with the same opportunities. It isn’t the 1950’s anymore and it will never be like that again. So when we go back to thinking about racial profiling and discrimination, is it the police that are targeting black or is it the media itself for commerce?

Works Cited:

https://mediapromotesracism.wordpress.com/

http://newobserveronline.com/new-fbi-crime-figures-confirm-black-towns-dangerous-white-areas-safest/

Definition Argument-yeezygod21

Smartphones have been a great advancement in technology and in society. Like any other tool they help us with our daily tasks such as keeping us close to public safety officials, allowing us the ability to transfer money that helps us manage our lifestyles, and being able to check the safety of our families with a push of a button. Having the ability to talk to someone miles away has made life convenient and full of contentment for modern day people. It is safe to say that the phone is one of the most important tools ever made along with electricity, the telescope, and the wheel.

The practice of sending information has been a valuable assist to forming society since the renaissance. To be able to inform, people can be the difference between life and death in a state of war. The phone is another staple to humanity such as U.S presidents are to the development of America. However, not all presidents are helpful -to the well being of the country as such not all uses of phones are beneficial to our daily lives. Recently phones have been the bane of our daily progression as we constantly check our phones as we work. Our phones have been given as much responsibility to their owners as their owners’ function in society. Moreover, phones help us get things done. Now think for a moment about how someone could use that tool that helps you with getting things done with different intentions for its uses than to its owner’s purpose. There you have an issue; the privacy of one’s belongings is one of the most sought-after luxuries humanity has set for itself. The foundation of America was fought for the individual privacy to practice any religion. Forward two hundred and forty years into the future and we find us with a similar conflict with individual ownership boundaries. Most recently this conflict has been brought to light with news of terrorism in America. In 2015, a terrorist attack occurred in San Bernardino, California. The terrorist attack was a mass shooting carried out by a Pakistani couple that aimed their sights at a San Bernardino country department of public health Christmas party, where 16 people were killed and 24 people suffered non-fatal injuries. After being pursued the couple were killed in a shoot out with police. In all, a total of 40 people were harmed with the intent of causing terror in America. While investigating the remains of the couple, the FBI found an Apple Iphone that is understood to hold information on the couples’ activities. The modern day conflict with privacy was that the FBI wanted Apple to open the Iphones encrypted system to investigate the information that it holds. How does one feel when their government pursues access to one of the most powerful tools in the current age? Giving the FBI that kind of power is a serious bridge of trust. The FBI has made a case with the Department of Justice that would put Apple in the position to hold responsibility of the phones property having been the manufacturer. Apple being the entity that it is was adamant to allow the case to follow through without debate first. The company stands against the FBI when considering how much power they could give the government with just one case to decrypt a single iphone. Beyond this instance the government can use this knowledge to perform whatever surveillance deemed useful, which is a lot of power. The debate over whether Apple can be held accountable for it’s products second party uses after developing an issue with a third party can show the conflict of interest between the American people and the consumers of technology

Definition Argument–childishharambe

Definition Argument A08

 

Its so bad but yet so good.  Junk food is broadcasted everywhere it is as if we just can not get away from it.  It is even worse when it is your only option when you go to a sports game of any kinds concession stand starting anywhere from little league baseball games leading all the way up to the concession stands at a professional sports outing.  “Unlike school lunchrooms, which must meet USDA regulations, high school concession stands remain mostly exempt from government health intervention, which many groups fear would decrease concession stand sales and customer satisfaction. ” (Food&BrandLab, pg.1)  The reason this issue has never been resolved is because it is thought that sales would plummet.  Obesity has been in the most recent years a big problem which affects all ages, genders, and races.  Sports games make it easy to decide on getting a cheeseburger, candy, or a sugary soft drink or maybe all of the above.  Their job is to promote options which they can profit the most off of.  Its time we begin to demand immediate change and a call to action on the food being served at concession stands.

It is not bad enough that you cant watch television for ten minutes without having a Sprite commercial come on but it is also integrated into events such as Super Bowl halftime shows “Brought to you by Coca-Cola grab one today”.  I do not remember the last time I went to an Eagles game where I didn’t feel pressured into buying a beer, Pepsi, or a cheesesteak.  Since I bought one maybe my brother, or my sister might do the same thing or one up me and buy a large combo instead of the medium.  It is time we bite back at obesity and start fighting obesity.  Sparking change where eating junk food is a tradition and that would be at a concession stand located near you.

Works Cited

                            Laroche, Helena. “Concession Stand Makeovers: A Pilot Study of Offering Healthy Foods at High School Concession Stands.” Food and Brand Lab |. N.p., n.d. Web. 31 Oct. 2016.    

                                                               Laroche, Helena. “Concession Stand Makeover.” Food and Brand Lab |. N.p., n.d. Web. 31 Oct. 2016.                          

A08 Definition Argument-Dublin517

Is Tinder a Dating App? A Hot Debate

                     Human beings (or at least most human beings) require relationships for healthy and satisfactory lives, we are by nature, social creatures. The relationships we choose to partake in can take many forms from platonic friendships to romantic partnerships. Titles of these different types of relationships, identities, as well as orientations are spidering into all different types of scales and spectrums and can become quite confusing. That being said, in the age of technology, finding acquaintances that will help us to create our relationships and identities is becoming increasingly easier. Social media tools such as Twitter, Facebook, and the holy-grail of Instagram have made meeting new people especially easy. However, to further these attempts, the existence of dating services such as Eharmony and Tinder have made finding romantic/sexual partners (specifically) even easier. At a first glance, Tinder and Eharmony belong on the same playing field, but actually these two different examples are playing for two different teams.

                           Both companies are online services that aim to bring single persons together to create some sort of partnership (whether it lasts for one vodka cranberry or one lifetime is irrelevant right?). At their root, yes they are similar, but the results of the services they provide often go in two separate directions. Tinder has become synonymous with quick and easy hookups that do not go much further beyond first names and one night stands. While Eharmony is more of a household name that your sister’s-friend’s-cousin met her fiance of 2 years with, and boy she couldn’t be happier. As Nick Bilton of the New York Times puts it, “And all that swiping has given Tinder the nickname “the hookup app,” for its reputation for one-night stands-though the company tries to distance itself from the label.” Whether the company enjoys being known for it’s hookup status is irrelevant, because that is exactly what it does.

                            The differences between dating apps and dating sites is even more clear when discussing the methods used to create matches. Companies like Eharmony and Match.com utilize “love algorithms” while Tinder capitalizes on men (and women’s) mere physical attraction. Bilton characterizes Tinder in the same way someone would approach another in a bar-type setting; a person does not walk in and fill out an application and wait for a message, they see someone they find visually appealing and offer to buy them a drink or ask for a dance. This is perhaps the biggest difference between apps like Tinder and sites like Eharmony, the reason more hookups happen with Tinder is because it is rooted in physical desire while Eharmony makes attempts at establishing emotional connections between users. Tomas Chamorro-Premuzic wrote a piece for The Guardian, and within it he sums up the difference between the face-based Tinder and emotion-centric dating site, “This has been an important lesson for data enthusiasts who have tried to sterilise the game of love by injecting rigorous decision-making and psychometric algorithms into the process. Well, it turns out that people are a lot more superficial than psychologists thought. They would rather judge 50 pictures in two minutes than spend 50 minutes assessing one potential partner.”

                            Tinder is not the only hookup hub of the internet. Grindr is a location based app meant for gay/bisexual/queer men looking for partners and is also well known for its resulting sexual encounters. HER which was previously known as Daatch, is also a location based app (similar to both Tinder and Grindr) that is meant for lesbian, bisexual, or queer women. Grindr and HER fall into categories slightly different from Tinder because they focus on LGBTQ communities distinctively, while Tinder offers both “heterosexual and homosexual” search options. LGBTQ communities have their own stereotypes revolving promiscuity and sexcapades, and their connection to the technosexual landscapes that differ from the heterosexual experiences that dominate Tinder.

                  Despite the target audience, one difference does prevail between dating services, some are free and some cost money. Eharmony and its lesser known counterparts charge, sometimes a hefty fee for its usage; while Tinder and its counterparts are cost free (besides some gimmicky in-app purchase options). The users of expensive dating agencies are typically older and more invested in finding a serious relationship. A study was performed through Winthrop University’s psychology department in which the risk taking behavior, age, and gender were examined in users of free versus paid dating programs. The results generally stated that those not looking for long term relationships were more likely to use free dating services (like Tinder) and more men used free dating sites (Grom). In addition, Emily Grom reports “Sixty percent of paid site users expected to meet their perfect match and less than 1 % expected to just hook up.” Despite these findings, there are those that disagree with defining Tinder as an app that is used by most for sexually driven purposes. At times, it is seen as a successful way to meet new people and potential long term partners. It would be impossible to dismiss that healthy long-lasting relationships can result from Tinder, in fact many have, however there is a clear trend that forces Tinder into the new-age category of “hookup apps”.

                    Considering that some people do not even know that Tinder exists, discussing the subtle differences that define it as a hookup app (compared to dating websites) may seem irrelevant. Yet, walk down the hallway of any given dorm room and buzzwords like “swipe left” or “new match” will be in abundance. From the perspective of a college student the presence of social media and dating services is incredibly large and even distracting, which is why open avenues of dialogue surrounding them are not only important but also beneficial. Understanding how to navigate this new world of technology is necessary for those being brought up in an age where it demands their attention. Knowing what sets Tinder apart from the rest may not aid in getting a college degree but it does help when it weaves its way into most dining hall conversations.

Works Cited
Bilton, Nick. “Tinder, the Fast-Growing Dating App, Taps an Age-Old Truth.” The New York Times. N.p., 29 Oct. 2014. Web.
Chamorro-Premuzic, Tomas. “The Tinder Effect: Psychology of Dating in the Technosexual Era.” The Guardian. Guardian News and Media, 17 Jan. 2014. Web.
Grom, Emily E. “Love Me Tinder or Mis-Match.com: Free versus Paid Online Dating Sites.” Digital Commons @ Winthrop University. N.p., 22 Apr. 2016. Web.

Definition Argument – darnell18

Discrimination still plays an incredibly large role in society today. Varying throughout many groups, races, genders, etc., people are currently continuing to live through the struggle of being judged based off of physical appearance. The dictionary defines the word discrimination as “the unjust or prejudicial treatment of different categories of people or things, especially on the grounds of race, age, or sex.” Much like any other definition of most words, digging a little bit deeper than a textbook interpretation to fully comprehend the word is a necessity. In relation to the researched topic at hand, discrimination is heavily incorporated in the enforcing of laws, and routine traffic stops in particular.

The concept of discrimination is morally wrong and unjust however it is looked at. What is even worse is that this group of minorities being discriminated against are now potentially getting into trouble with the law based on how they look. In Christopher Ingraham’s article, “You Really Can Get Pulled Over For Driving While Black, Federal Statistics Show,” proclaims, “Perhaps most troubling from a civil liberties perspective, nearly five percent of blacks weren’t given any reason for why they were stopped, compared with 2.6 percent of whites and 3.3 percent of Hispanics.” This quote speaks volumes toward the issue at hand. Astoundingly, nearly double the amount of African Americans as compared to caucasians are not even informed as to why they are pulled over. This is where the line must be drawn. There is already no room for racism and discrimination, and now it has been blown so far out of proportion that these people being discriminated against have to pay money for it and possibly have a tainted record.

On the other hand, while discrimination is real and potentially harmful in today’s society, it is also interesting to take into consideration what race the police officers happen to be in the same situation. For example, the statistics show that roughly five percent of African Americans are not given a reason for why they are stopped, but would these traffic stops be considered equally as discriminatory if the police officer making the stop was a minority as well? It is most certainly a very intriguing factor in all of this, because if a black police officer pulls over a black man, very few people’s initial reaction is that the cop is racist. Whereas if it were a white cop in the same situation, the very first thought that comes across most everyone’s mind in society today is that it was for discriminatory purposes. This does not automatically make it acceptable for a black police officer to pull over another black man without a reason, but in the big picture, it simply raises suspicion about an officer’s motive.

One of the worst parts about this issue is that the discrimination does not begin and end with simple traffic stops. From illegal searches of a vehicle to license suspensions and tickets, how an officer chooses to discipline a man or woman that they went out of their way to pull over because of their appearance can be equally discriminatory. Recently, it has even been escalated to these citizens having their lives taken away from them in what could have just been a routine traffic stop. Just recently this past July, a Minnesota police officer shot and killed a black man after pulling him over for a broken tail light. In this instance, it is not clear that he was pulled over because he was black, given that there was a tail light out. Nevertheless, this is something that is rarely ever heard about with a white man on the fatal end of gunpoint. It has gotten so bad that in many places, whenever a police officer even approaches a minority, people take their phones out to record what happens in anticipation of it going awry. When it becomes expected that these stops will go wrong to this extent, something must be done about it.

If our country chooses to turn a blind eye to this, we have seen that a revolt is not unrealistic. In her article, “The Big Question About Why Police Pull Over So Many Black Drivers,” Kim Soften asserted that following the fatal shooting of Philando Castile, snipers in Dallas killed five police officers and injured more. This country is not far from potentially going into a civil war between police and African Americans, and the root of it all is none other than the negative power of discrimination.

In conclusion, many different problems stem from judging and disciplining somebody based off of their race and appearance. Racism and discrimination have been around for hundreds of years in this country and it would be nice to be able to say that we have come such a long way as a country, but the fact that this is still an issue in 2016 is proof that laws may have changed, but many people’s mindsets have not. It is that toxic belief in discrimination that has set the progress of this nation back.

Works Cited

Ingraham, Christopher. “You Really Can Get Pulled Over For Driving While Black, Federal Statistics Show” The Washington Post. 09 Sept. 2014. Web. 30 Oct. 2016

Soften, Kim. “The Big Question About Why Police Pull Over So Many Black Drivers” The Washington Post. 08 July 2016. Web. 30 Oct. 2016