Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when not physically visible. In today’s society, having faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled with in the proper manner is essential. If not then we’d have to hide all of our money under a mattress or around the house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of money. I always thought money was simple; either the money is there or it isn’t. However, after being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When getting paid, your boss doesn’t hand out cash or a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to the respective bank account and we just have to trust that.
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Rowan Counterintuitive 
Most of this is good, Prof. A few problems remain.
Contains 2nd-person language: In today’s society, having faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled with in the proper manner is essential.
It wasn’t part of the assignment, but I wonder if you can fix this flawed “verbing” structure: However, after being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar.
Mixes the singular “no one” with the plural “their”: No one actually sees their money being transferred.
Contains 2nd-person language: When getting paid, your boss doesn’t hand out cash or a physical check.
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