For my research I will be examining the hypothesis that involvement of foreign affairs and how it starts more wars rather then prevent wars. While many countries believe lending a helping hand may create a better world, it actually causes more problems with the world in terms of threats and creating a war.
While researching the involvement of foreign affairs I found that more problems occurred when foreign countries started getting involved with a problem. The UN was created to decrease problems but really, them being involved just creates higher tension with in themselves and leads to bigger problems, such as terrorist attacks or even going to war.
Syria: The story of the conflict
The Essential Content of the Article: shows us what was going on in Syria the problem people had with the government and how a war broke out, the advantage that terrorists take from the people in a state of emergency. What foreign countries do to lend a helping hand, and how they affect the people of their own country.
What it Proves: what this proves is that risks do happen in helping others out, many should think about there own people before helping others.
Germany’s real problem with refugees
The Essential Content of the Article: This shows us the problem of lending a hand with foreign countries and allowing these Syrians to come into the country, they would bring there ways with them such as assaulting people and creating many problems.
What it Proves: What this proves is that lending a hand just may seem like the right decision but there are many after effects that can be caused by helping others in a time of need. Your people may get hurt and threatened, all because you want to help.
Why ISIS threatens the U.S.—and what we can do about it
The Essential Content of the Article: This shows us that even by handling a hand to help some innocent people out, the enemy could be feel endangered and show signs of anger by doing an attack to warn us off. By helping out a friend we could get attacked and have our own citizens hurt.
What it Proves: This proves that we should think about ourselves and our people before getting involved with foreign affairs that we have no conflicts in, because at the end of the day our people might be getting hurt.
Syria’s civil war: US to send extra military personnel
The Essential Content of the Article: This shows us that we are taking our own people out of USA to another country that we should have no affiliation with or get involved with, sending our soldiers and risking their lives for the better of the Syria.
What it Proves: This proves that we are willing to risk our own soldiers to send them into foreign affairs and risk their lives, instead of keeping them with their families safe.
Who’s Fighting Who In Syria
The Essential Content of the Article: this shows us everyone who is involved there affiliation with this civil war, what actions they are taking, and there reason of getting involved.
What it Proves: This proves that many countries got involved for different reasons whether it was for economic reason, better for the world, or just to cause chaos. All got involved for their own belief, for a better world for themselves.
http://www.people-press.org/2014/06/26/section-6-foreign-affairs-terrorism-and-privacy/
Rowan Counterintuitive 
I’m glad to see you tackle a serious and important topic, BTB. For the moment, I’m entirely unclear what it is you will argue. You say:
Something essential is missing from that thesis sentence.
For the rest of your sources, I get no clear sense of what information the articles actually contain.
For example:
Of course, “handling a hand” is confusing to begin with. Then I can’t be sure who “the enemy” is or what exactly they object to, since I can’t tell what kind of help is being offered. Who the “friend” is also is unclear. Are we sending troops? Are the Syrians or the Russians retaliating? Do they retaliate on the field of battle? Or is ISIS creating terror attacks in the US to punish us for accepting refugees? All of these are possible. I shouldn’t be so much in the dark.
Once you clarify Source 1, repeat the exercise for the other sources, please.
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